Reviews for Henkou
secret-werewolves chapter 6 . 11/14/2018
Now, this is sad. I got tears in my eyes. And that cliffhanger :/ nooooooo
I hope you'll update soon, though it's probably not likely considering the activeness of your account
Nonetheless, I'll just keep rereading this story then ToT
NitroChji 240 chapter 6 . 5/22/2016
Wow. That was kinda depressing. But still a great story! Good job! But it was sad.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/9/2016
This is getting REALLY interesting! I hope you continue this. :)
dragoncreators chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
I really wish you'd continue... What a cliff hanger. The tentio. In this story. Damn. Please keep going! Or at least post where you were going with this!
The Epitome of Eccentricity chapter 6 . 5/19/2014
This is okay. It can be a little hard to follow, but you got better by this chapter. You have a long wait between chapters, but I can't really complain about that, lol.
fatum12 chapter 6 . 4/30/2014
so...
any plans to continue?
a great read though...
CryptIXeeper chapter 6 . 2/6/2014
I find myself...unexpectedly saddened, that such a piece hasn't been updated for close to a year.

I'll favorite and follow, yes. However, best to keep any hope of this updating far from my heart, lest it only hurt me in the process.
Riidas chapter 6 . 11/25/2013
GODDAMN THIS IS GOOD! The entire thing (of six chapters) is beautifully made, you could feel the angst coming off of it in waves. Amazingly written I'll be waiting for your next chapter, no matter how long that takes.

I inexplicably find myself liking Sabrina even more now...
Astropye chapter 6 . 9/22/2013
Whoa, now it's getting really interesting. Will he actually tell her?
Yankee718 chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
Wow everything he thought and went through in his adventures was a lie a figment of his imagination cant wait for the next update
Are all the names used chapter 6 . 9/8/2013
I'm disappointed in you.
fireclaw239 chapter 6 . 7/24/2013
whne are you gonna update?
Firered7 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Interesting and impressive. You've turned one of the biggest jokes known as creepypasta, and turned it into something worth reading.
In caverns dark chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Nicely written.

But the beginning was a little patchy with regards to flow. A lot of the necessary filler just wasn't there. The problem has persisted to a lesser degree and as a result it feels as if Ash is walking through a dream. A dream where he isn't himself, where the things he cares about the things that make him him, just aren't there.

Other than that it's written well.

Well enough for me to fave and wait and see where things are going, heck,the premise of time/dimension travel is reason enough.

But I just can't *link* myself up with Ash. He's distant... undefined, like a ghost.
ProcrastinationIsMyCrime chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
so sad i almost cried
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