cool o/s a bit confusing in places and a shame they only had one child but enjoyable none the less thanks for sharing ;D

Perfect story,i enjoyed ridin it ;-) XD :-P O:-)

Percect one-shot,,luvly fairytale..i enjoyed ths story lots :-P XD O:-) :-) B-)

Very lovely story. However only thing that I noticed was missing was the part right before Bella gave birth to Reneesme. You mention Edward being there at the birth. But in the previous sentence/paragraph you mention he had fallen off Jacob in evil kingdom... am I missing something on how he and Bella reunited. You also forgot to write the reunion.

Aww X)

Cute story. Thanks for the submittion.

aaaaahhhh...all fairytales should be like this!...love it!:)

That was a whole lotta story ;) I enjoyed it! Good luck!

Wow...that was a LOT of fairy tales combined!

Good Luck!

Kathie