I really loved your story!

Loved it nice approach
Good work

Here i am making another review after reading some other and well...fuck. Arthur kissing Merlin like that is borderline rape. Honestly. I don't care that it's Merthur, i love Merthur, but thats honestly disgusting on Arthurs part. And keeping Merlin weak throuhgout the whole story is not developing the character.

Arthur using Merlin, Arthur haming Hunith, Arthur only wanting Merlin in the beginning because he is supposed to help him kill his father. Its so way out of character that I can't read it. Arthur using magic okay, i would've liked it but not my type of Merlin fanfic read. I probably would of liked it more if Arthur AND merlin were BAMF's, but i felt like Merlin was an abused dog most the time.

Someone reviewd that it was beorng or somthing at first but when it got the part where Arthur actually needed Merlin help, they were excited.

No, that's wrong. On so many levels. You abuse someones Mother, be the cause of why their phyiscaly and mentally hurt. But them through hell with people who bull the hell out of him, and Arthur has the fucking nerve to say he needs his help. And kisses him without fucking...ok, im ending this now, not reading this fanfic, sorry, but not for me. At all. Bye now.

So im on the seventh chapter and im not one for fanfiction where the characters use eachother like this. Especially Merlin and Arthur. They are so close. And to see Arthur go out of his way to harm Hunith just to get Merlin to help him defeat his father is...extremley frustrating for to me. I just dont like it when their abusive like this. So, intresting at first i was gonna let some things go but the whole thing is just very OOC and abusive. So yeah, my opinion, im sure there are those in the fandom who like it, im just not one of them.

Delightful story with touches of humor!

So sad.

Such a tender moment. I like the affection between Merlin and Arthur.

OMG soooooo good! I don't usually enjoy the merther as much, but this fic was very much the exception to the rule! Loved it! Needy Arthur is adorable, and MAGIC Arthur is just really really hot!

I felt like the story startef as great then it turned bad. Really dissapointing. There was no Merthur romance, no wedding between them, Arthur became spineless idiot. And Balinor pairing was disgusting. I'm very disappointed.

I wanted to barf on this part. Balinor is fucking old. He could be Morgana's father. Other people pair her with Leon which is more than appropriate. Why hell would you do that?

absolutely my all time favorite merlin fic. I loved everypart of it especially how Balinor lived and just the slow progression of events. I wish it wasn't finished.

Cuz merlin is awesome! Amazing fic! So amazing!

Oh poor merlin!

The great and powerful merlin! Bum bum bum!

Definitely a bit dark but I like it! Good job!