| Reviews for Blue Rose |
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   UnknownFlux chapter 6 . 6/28/2015 I'm loving this and I can't wait for cloud and the others to reach Midgar! There's a lot of stuff I'd love to see happen, but it's your story and you're doing pretty good so far! Also, I think there's more to Cloud's dad than we think. He knows a lot of people. |
| Mimi chapter 6 . 6/21/2015 I love Zack in this fic, crazy psycho puppy. I like the fact that there are many characters and it's easy to keep up with them. Please continue on with this. |
| UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 6 . 6/20/2015 yay onwards to Midgar, i look forward to more :) |
| bookworm4ever81 chapter 6 . 6/17/2015 First, I want to say that I see a lot of potential in this story. That is why I am reading it. That being said, I hope that you take my next few comments as what they are, which is constructive criticism. I think that you need a beta. You have some spelling errors that need to be fixed. You also have quite a few plot holes and that causes the story to be confusing. But, other than that, I liked this story. Good luck with it; I hope that you update soon. |
| SagenWarrior chapter 6 . 6/13/2015 hope to see more. |
| Marxou chapter 6 . 6/13/2015 You have a good plot started but this story seems to be following a LOT of characters and it's a lot to keep up with. I would focus on Cloud and his group, and the 4 dangerous men, and only add other things if it's 100 percent vital and likely we won't know the plot if it's not added. xD You have a good writing style so I'm sure this wouldn't be hard for you. Happy writing! |
| Rydonpuppy chapter 1 . 3/16/2013 Hi I know you haven't update this story in a long time but please consider continuing it. This story could move in several intesting directions which I would like to read if you would coninue the story. |
| 1sunfun chapter 5 . 1/14/2013 Nice. |
| FireFox Vixen chapter 5 . 8/20/2012 Awesome |
| Night Kiryuu chapter 5 . 3/15/2011 I like where this is going, and the bits of humor sprinkled around. |
| Burning In The Dark chapter 5 . 12/5/2010 Kinda OOC, short, and information may be a little mixed up :P but this is just helpful... no killing me :) I shall keep reading :) I hope to see improvement :) and for the story to progress. |
| coolgamer chapter 5 . 11/22/2010 i like this story. please update soon. |
| Miko Vampire chapter 5 . 11/4/2010 Rufus won't stand a chance once Sephiroth sees Cloud, why want a power hungry selfish whore when he can have innocent stubborn and beautiful Cloud! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON! |
| UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 5 . 11/4/2010 deepground thats a funny name i cant wait to read more about cloud please update soon |
| UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 4 . 11/1/2010 oh so far i like this stroy i cant wait for the next chapter its pretty interesting please update soon |
