Love It!

Soooooo, in the little teaser there is a grammar mistake. How you can read it...and miss it is just freaking beyond me. And there are several in the first chapter. If you reread this I doubt you could miss them. They are all like the teaser, missing a word or something. The teaser says " . . .Edward mason is about to find out in world. . . "
OBVIOUSLY your missing an "a".

What the hell? If I were these guys i would quit helping them and let the volturi deal with edward and bella

These guys are helping Edward and he treats them like crap...and the way he treats bella...not a very likable character

Fantastic story! The plot was so original and I've never read anything like it. I love THIS Edward and Bella. I loved the minor characters (except Emmett for most of it) and absolutely ADORED how afraid of Bella's talent Aro turned out to be and how he gave in to the story that Edward supplied him with. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.

Excellent story, thank you for sharing your words :)

I enjoyed that

I've no idea when you wrote this but I'm so enjoying it.

I really liked your story. Loved its originality and your writing. Thank you for sharing

Amazing fic xx

I followed this from a Facebook rec.

It is soo good.
I loved it. It was different.

This is like the purge. I like it. I hope Bella is safe from the vampires and Edward can be able to protect her. I wish Aro would die

He should have turned her when he had the chance ..

Haha! So lucky that he stopped Vladimir and the gang from seeing the rest of that video!
Thanks for writing such a fun and exciting story. Now i'm off to read those More Time outtakes.

This is very sweet! :-)