Reviews for The Charmer and the Lost Girl
LadyViolet2112 chapter 1 . 6/8
Awesome story! Like this pairing. Thanks for sharing
momma2fan chapter 1 . 5/11
Great job!
Chloeebeee chapter 1 . 8/24/2019
Fuck that was smokinggg
leward1992 chapter 1 . 7/24/2019
The best Demetri and Bella one shot! Loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2018
Awesome story ! Wouldn’t mind reading more like this one, especially with this pairing.
GaijinVamp chapter 1 . 7/6/2018
I hate WH also. I love this fic. I was afraid that she'd get revenge on him; cut something off? build a fire? twist off his head? Instead they have an HEA. THANK YOU!
firephinoex101 chapter 1 . 6/9/2018
This one shot made me want to cry. Thanks for sharing.
HimawariDaisy chapter 1 . 10/31/2017
OMG WILL YOU PLEASE STOP MAKING EPIC ONE-SHOTS THAT WOULD MAKE AMAZING FULL LENGTH STORIES. Ahem... sorry got a bit crazy there, but seriously this story would be amazing as a full length!
Yira chapter 1 . 7/30/2017
Fav'd only cause eddy was an idiot... Maybe..
Cacau Black chapter 1 . 3/31/2017
The best fic Demitri/Bella. Good Job :)
DragonSpirit03 chapter 1 . 5/29/2016
AHHHHHHH! CUTE!
TinaF chapter 1 . 5/22/2016
Loved it!
WiseOldSoul chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
i love your stories.
i enjoyed this little O/S of redemption...
however, i somehow am kind of left a bit unsatisfied.
not of your writing... never of your writing,
but of Demetri and how quick to forgive Bella was.
i realize 30 years of misery for both have passed, but somehow
that doesn't seem to be enough for me.
heartless witch am i? perhaps, but i wished that he suffered a bit
more even after bella being found and knowing all, i wished she
would have somehow held out a bit more and punish him for
his actions a little more...for at least 50 years since vampires live forever,
50 years seem nothing compared to eternity once forgiveness is awarded.
just putting myself in bella's shoes and how she must have felt when he
fked her then Heidi and all of the things he said to her, how bella must have
truly felt miserable to want to die, ready to kill herself over him after
going on a 30 year rampage of sort...
just my own little opinion..but i have enjoyed the story very well of course,
with just a little of my own tweeking ;)
ty as always for your stories !
babyvfan chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Don't ship it but did like the story
elietkaterina chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
super
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