Reviews for Focus
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Watson's going to freak out when he hears that Holmes is dead.
AdidasandPie chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
Hey! I read this awhile ago and never reviewed it. Silly me.

If I remember correctly, my impression of this was that you kept the Holmes personality quite in-check, despite his situation and that AU time period. Some people seem to change the character's personality when the time period changes, but you didn't; so that's good. Good work.

Slightly jealous that you get to write this kind of stuff for *school*.
pott chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
I love it and I thinks it makes a lot of sense - to me at least ;-)

I love the story and I would love to read more new fics by you.

Maybe even a sequel ? :-)
reflekshun chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
Thank you for sharing a very good read with us.
mrspencil chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
A very compelling piece of writing. It does leave quite a few questions hanging in the air, but that is a positive, not a negative comment. Very well done,

Mrs P:)
pewongon chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
I actually want a next chapter. Will there be one? Congratulations, this is a good plot line and I love it, it makes no sense but further explanation would make it perfect, and it's great without further explanation anyway.

Some of the best fanfiction I've read this week.

~Gwid
bemj11 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
That was entrancing, if not a bit worrisome. But if that was Watson, and I'm pretty sure it was, he'll be just fine. Good job.