Love it. It was so sweet. I really liked it

Wonderful And Hilarious. I Know She Meant Well, But It Was Crul Of SM To Want Us To Get Attached To Brianna When She Was Goint To Die.

That was a really good story. Liked that the Denali's had come to help the Cullen's and that they wanted to adopt Bree. Will be looking forward to reading Dark Sun.

love it

A great story

The only thing I have to say is: WRITE MORE

Quite like your story. See you also read the book about Bree

Tanner. Always thought it mean of Ms Meyer to have the child killed (she really was just a child) even though it had to be. The guard had to maintain the Volturi ruthlessness.

I noticed you had the Denali clan attend this fight. Good idea; Jane and the others wouldn't to be amazed of the Cullen success if they had assistance.

And of course the perfect solution - send Bree to Alaska.

Did you win the competition with this story - quite deserved it.

loved it...really looking forward to reading DS, when do you think you'll be posting it?

when are you going to start writing the main story? i cant wait to read it :d xxx

Enjoyed! Happy you saved Bree...

i loved reading this