This was truly a gorgeous, gorgeous story. I noticed a bit of tense mix up towards the start, but it didn't detract from the story too much. I absolutely adore how Remus thought Sirius brought the sun, and didn't taste any bitterness in his kiss as he had in the food. Aw, the last line was the sweetest. You have lovely descriptions and portray their emotions in a really engaging way.

LOVE THIS STORY! SO FRIGGIN' ADORABLE!

You put Remus and Sirius' relationship in the best light. Tender, and sweetly written! LL

Aaahhhh!the sweetness is going to kill me!I love this!

*SWOON*

I really, really, really liked this oneshot. It was terribly cute and fluffy. I like the nickname, Moonshine. It just makes it cuter. :)

I don't know what else to say; adorable, adorable, adorable. That is all.

Ahhhhh. I just love reading Sirius and Remus together.

Haha that managed to be sweet and sexy at the same time, so nice job! Not many people can achieve that.

Im gonna go read another of your stories and maybe even comment on it too!

*explodes from the soppy adorableness*

I love this. LOVE this. It's so delicate, so short and sweet, and yet beautifully detailed... the perfect amount. "Moonshine" is perhaps the cutest nickname ever, as well. I love a little Remus-y angst, and I love the way you describe them and their relationship!

OMG, AMAZING! Love it! Please take away he complete and write some more! Pweeeeeeeeeeese!

This was so fluffy && cute(:

i love remus and sirius together! i like your story, you were very good at writing remus' point of view. thank you for writing it.

Gosh, that was beautiful.