Reviews for First Day, Yo
Bridgekiel chapter 1 . 10/2/2019
This is so adorable. Well the Bridgette and Ezekiel parts.
Leave him alone Duncan.
I know this old. But I hope for part 2. Maybe Ezekiel asking her to the prom or on a date.
Or she with Geoff and Ezekiel is upset.

The pairing is super adorable and I wish there was more.
Samtastic 3.0 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Well, Duncan just got his sorry $$ expelled. When Zeke's father finds out, he'll call the cops, and the school will expel Duncan to make sure he doesn't blemish their record. And after that, I'd say Gwen should dump his anger-management-needing butt. And with his parents...
Good story.
Oh, an his wannabe gangsta act isn't all that bad, in my opinion.
Islanda chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I happened to really enjoy that little gangster act! It kinda cracked me up! The whole oneshot was really well done though! Everyone was in character, and it was really cool to see what it would be like for Ezekiel at school! I could totally see that happening...him talking to someone's girlfriend, then getting beat up...but it was nice to see that people (spare Duncan) were being kind to him in general! (:

Too bad this is just a oneshot...cause I'd really like to see what happens during fourth period! But oneshots are usually oneshots for a reason, right?

Oh well! I enjoyed reading this as part of my random late night fanfiction browsing! (Sorry, that sounds kinda weird...:P)

But GREAT story! :D
catfish jones chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
You should write more! Pleeeeese! This would make an amazing story!
AlyGone chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
I love this!

I myself wrote a fic with Zeke attending highschool for the first time, for a school project. Its an Ezzy fic though, and its nothing compared to this!

I wish this was more then just a one-shot... It would be great if it became a full fledged story! But its still great the way it is.

*Favs*
The Lightning Knight chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Why didn't a pretty girl let me lean on her when I transfered to public school? :-O
John Morrison Invades TDI chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Well, I liked the gangsta routine too, it gave him more personality, like Cody's failed attempts to hit on Gwen. I guess people didn't like it because modern rap blows (Soulja Boy sucks).

On to the story, it was cute and the protagonists were in character (Ezekiel's awkwardness, Bridgette's kindness and carelessness and Duncan's douchiness).
The Kobold Necromancer chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I cannot tell you how much I love this story! I mean, I loved every part of it! I found it to be brilliant, and all that mad slang that Zeke would use!

The confrontation between him and Gwen, then Duncan, was great. I loved his bemused reactions to their hair color, and man is Duncan an ass!

Funny to have Courtney and Bridgette come to his rescue. We see him thinking about being the man and helping the woman, but thank goodness he didn't say it out loud. :)

Anaïs Nin, that's EXACTLY what I think too, about people. I mean, narrow-minded people like Duncan think everyone thinks like them. JoeMerl, how'd you find out about this genius Anaïs Nin? :)

Hehe, Bridgette set Ezekiel's dad on fire? That's so like her. ;)

Ezekiel's lovestruck moments were the best. I think my favorite part of all his swooning moments were "He had been looking at the girl's dreamy green eyes as she said this, and for a moment he was anonymous to himself as well." So darn cute!

An awesome one-shot, it makes me kind of sad it is only a one-shot. You did an awesome job. :D
cinnabean chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
lol i heart his gangstar thing too XD
The Ram 94 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
hey his time as a wangsta was good
invaderzimfannumber1 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Well I just finished reading this story and I loved it. I especailly was surprised that you paired Duncan with Gwen I thought you hated that pairing. Also is the before or after total drama island. Anyway I liked the way Zeke acted I miss the old him even the new him is kind of funny. And Bridgett was sure funny setting a guy on fire is so her. Anyway I have to go post my adventure td thing I hope you like it and I look forward to your's. This is invaderzimfannumber1 signign off.
Imagi chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
*pat* *pat* It's okay. *hug*

I just enjoy hearing his accent way more then that weird rap thing the creators seem to delight sticking him with.

Storywise...WOO! New story from JoeMerl! Awesome! :D

Got to love Zeke even if the writers don't...

enough on that.

Well written and creative as always! Hopefully the fact that Bridgette now knows he was homeschooled will curb the boy/girl thing that more or likely will be closely coming.

Looking forward to the next part! :)

Imagi