Reviews for Trust
mayawene chapter 4 . 3/22
Thanks
Grac3 chapter 4 . 4/20/2016
I really enjoyed this. Can't wait to continue.
NeverTooMuchInspiration chapter 3 . 12/6/2014
Nicely done and very dramatic. A few minor errors and curiosities that I tend to associate with an author using a non-native language, which is not unexpected. Overall quite good and suspenseful. Thank you for posting this!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/27/2014
Tis was good.. but confusing...
sami1010220 chapter 4 . 9/18/2012
oh god, fantastic job!
WhimsyUsagi chapter 3 . 4/19/2012
lovely :) thank you
WhimsyUsagi chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
a very wonderfully written chapter, i enjoyed it. off to chapter 2
ChoqueFrontal chapter 3 . 7/8/2011
This was absolutely amazing.

Definitely, one of my fav fics.

Congratulations 3
ChoqueFrontal chapter 2 . 7/8/2011
So full of tension and angst, I'm loving it xD

At first I thought you were going to re-write the whole original chapter, but THIS is far better than expected! I love the fics in which Arthur finds out the fact that his manservant is a sorcerer, and this (at least so far) is the way I'd love things to happen :) It's exactly how I would write it!

Now I'm off to keep reading the other chapteers!
ChoqueFrontal chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
I've always thought that it must be really difficult to write with words the events that go on in a Merlin chapter, as they have plenty of gestures and fightings and stuff. But this.. this was birlliant!

I love the way you write. You are able to capture the whole battle without describing too much about the movements or the noise or everything else. With few words, many adjectives, you get to show all of the mess of the situation, both outside and inside of the characters- I'm absolutely amazed by that.

I really wish to achieve this English level; THIS is the way I want to be able to write my stories.

Congratulations for the great chapter, and now I'm off to keep reading the other ones :)
bookaddict27 chapter 3 . 5/23/2011
This was great, I really enjoyed reading it! It was an interesting take on the reveal. I'm going to have to read the sequel soon ]
SpangleyPony chapter 4 . 3/20/2011
Loved this story
Sarah James chapter 3 . 3/5/2011
Hmm, interesting story but Merlin would never have just allowed himself to accept death. He would have used his powers to escape, not be burnt to death, as has been shown before in the series. He wouldn't accept it until Arthur told him to escape; after all, if he dies, who will protect Arthur?
theoriginalmeathead chapter 3 . 11/3/2010
That was a wonderful read! Very nice, well written. :-)
Fujoshimon chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
LOL. A surprising cheery and hopeful ending in spite of all the angst in front :D

AWESOME FIC YEAH! Congratulations for completing the fic!
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