ack I thought they came out on the first that is why they did not have it XD. and please write more i absolutley adore kieli and smexy harvey!

Definitely write more ;) Yes, I can't wait for April either -_-" It doesn't start getting shipped until the 26th of April I think. I want to know what happens to Kieli after Harvey leaves! AAARRG! But yes, as for your story, a very good intro and the characters don't seem OOC at all. Harvey especially, although the chapter is not very long. It's too bad you've dubbed this story complete, I would have followed it until the end! But still, a very good chapter, although it leaves me wanting more.

Its been a really long time since I read Kieli and i just love the manga. Too bad its really short.. This was interesting, i hope you write more X) i love Harvey and Kieli

this was really good though i must ask whats happening in april that you cant wait for?

arggh, Harvey, you idiot! I felt like biting him when I read the ending of the third book and argh, the two following ones come out in April and September? This is torture :(

Anyways, really liked this one, I think you really caught their characters. Would like to read more :3

cool really like it

I haven't read this, but I think I mostly understood where everyone was coming from and who these two were in relation to one another.

I hear you. A bloody whole YEAR about until "The Son of Neptune" comes out! Percy or no? I have no idea.

But I still enjoyed this fanfic a lot, even if the ending seemed bittersweet.