Reviews for Old Man Naruto |
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Mason Oury chapter 1 . 7/24/2018 Who exactly is Inabi? Is she an OC...or maybe...is that a psuedonym? Anyways, loving the story so far, it's really intriguing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2014 *sigh* Am I the only one here that hates this shit fanfic where he just made naruto a complete bitch. Those weak ass attacks shouldn't even phase him. |
Bro chapter 5 . 10/27/2011 THAT... WAS THE BEST FAN FICTION I EVER READ |
Yoholic chapter 5 . 10/24/2011 Love this story its going in my favorites list |
Yoholic chapter 4 . 10/24/2011 im not sure if the poll is running still but danzo becoming hokage seems awesome |
Yoholic chapter 3 . 10/24/2011 The genjutsu trick was well done |
Yoholic chapter 2 . 10/24/2011 Love the concept of your story |
Crisios chapter 5 . 12/21/2010 when i saw how many reviews you had recieved, i thought that this fic would be horrifyingly bad. However, it surpassed my expectations and it is one of the really good fics i have read. The idea is really original and I can see a great sequel and prequel if anyone were to attempt it. Great job |
kivlar chapter 5 . 11/21/2010 I don't normally review, but since you seem to be a new author and I am having problems locating good stories lately, I thought I would give you some encouragement. I really like your writing style and appreciate how easy it is to read without stopping to cringe at poor grammar or spelling errors. I also like that your taking your stories in different directions rather then just rehashing the original plot word for word. You changed just enough to make the story interesting without making the characters to ooc to turn me off. Thanks for the story, /subscribe |
WiggleWiggleWiggle chapter 4 . 10/29/2010 Dude...this is so great. I don't care that almost everyone is dead, it is so rare that a well written story of naruto losing hope then killing everyone appears. Just remember be gory, detailed and graphic. |
kenegi chapter 4 . 10/29/2010 ooo ths is nice although i feel sorry or naruto TT. can he go into the pure jinjuriken state? Naruto with the cursed make XD not any people do that. |
shademaster chapter 4 . 10/29/2010 holy shit nice story itds been a while sins i seen a good original story out ther great job i know u dont have alot of reviews but dont let it stop u cant ewhit for till next time cya |
namikazestorm chapter 1 . 10/11/2010 This is really well done, the story is great, the grammar is excellent and everything looks to be really good, I can't really judge the story any further until you've poster then next couple of chapters but good job, so far you've grabbed my attention. XD |