Reviews for Forever Series: Desire
Lori Baker chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
that was beautifully written you just need to make them longer instead of a one-shot.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/1/2017
I like the love that is between the characters, it enhances chemistry. However, some of the lines felt a bit possesive that made me a bit uncomfortable. I understand it is a vampire story! A little more of Yuuki wi
uchiha.sakura.23 chapter 3 . 11/27/2012
nice..
Det. Corsicana chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
This was a fantastic love scene. I really love how you conveyed the sensations of love, the feelings intertwined. I really think it was positively well done, and I look forward to reading more!
uchiha.sakura.23 chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
nice ...
Everlasting Twig chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
More Please :)
livinquietly chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
love it
kittiyloveranime chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
love this series
KanamexYuukiLover chapter 2 . 7/12/2012
Cool!
rei chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
i love it
aisacchan chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
that was hot!
Lady Amira chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
I love your stories. You're a very gifted writer with an eye for detail.
Nini Hearts chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
i love the forever series i also like how u made it so anybody can follow it and get stuck. u should make one were yuuki gets pregnant with twins that shouldb intresting
Det. Corsicana chapter 3 . 5/12/2012
So sorry to hear about that! Best of luck to you!
ImmortalWar chapter 3 . 5/1/2012
I think that I passed out for a moment with a massive nosebleed keep up the...interesting...work. lol
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