Reviews for Forever Series: Desire |
---|
Lori Baker chapter 1 . 10/7/2019 that was beautifully written you just need to make them longer instead of a one-shot. |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/1/2017 I like the love that is between the characters, it enhances chemistry. However, some of the lines felt a bit possesive that made me a bit uncomfortable. I understand it is a vampire story! A little more of Yuuki wi |
uchiha.sakura.23 chapter 3 . 11/27/2012 nice.. |
Det. Corsicana chapter 1 . 8/29/2012 This was a fantastic love scene. I really love how you conveyed the sensations of love, the feelings intertwined. I really think it was positively well done, and I look forward to reading more! |
uchiha.sakura.23 chapter 1 . 8/24/2012 nice ... |
Everlasting Twig chapter 1 . 7/21/2012 More Please :) |
livinquietly chapter 1 . 7/13/2012 love it |
kittiyloveranime chapter 1 . 7/13/2012 love this series |
KanamexYuukiLover chapter 2 . 7/12/2012 Cool! |
rei chapter 1 . 6/4/2012 i love it |
aisacchan chapter 1 . 6/1/2012 that was hot! |
Lady Amira chapter 1 . 5/27/2012 I love your stories. You're a very gifted writer with an eye for detail. |
Nini Hearts chapter 1 . 5/12/2012 i love the forever series i also like how u made it so anybody can follow it and get stuck. u should make one were yuuki gets pregnant with twins that shouldb intresting |
Det. Corsicana chapter 3 . 5/12/2012 So sorry to hear about that! Best of luck to you! |
ImmortalWar chapter 3 . 5/1/2012 I think that I passed out for a moment with a massive nosebleed keep up the...interesting...work. lol |