Thanks for sharing, was great to read something different! I like that it was a much more realistic representation of how a relationship develops, and I always a love a strong Bella character as well!

This is an amazing story

Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ

Interesting story

Great story loved it wish there was more

I loved this story. So original and well thought out. I'm sorry I didn't know about it sooner and I wished you had extended it,but alas that may not happen. Thank you anyway for a lovely tale.

This was a wonderful story. A truly unique idea and such a good execution. Loved the character development (omg a fanfic with character development!) and the way you established your own universe without it feeling completely detached from Meyer's twilight universe.

I’ve just come back for another read of this story because i can’t get enough of these two. The calmness and steadiness of Bella just soothes me. And watching Edwards growth over time with Bella is brilliant.

This story is one of my top five favorite Twi fics!

Came across this story recently, loved it, so different.

Well , this was a little strange. I loved it. I like a strong independent Bella. I would like more but thats not going to happen. Loved that Bella destroyed the Volturi. All on her own. Excellent. Thank you.

This was beautiful! I want to say more but I just don’t have the words. Thank you for sharing- definitely going into my favorites.

WOW! Absolutely love your writing voice, your plot was good and refreshing in its uniqueness making it a very enjoyable read :-) THANK YOU for sharing! Truly wish you would write some more :-)

I dont understand why you didn't keep Bella as a shield. That's a great power to have.

Cute! I absolutely loved it! Such a great plot and I thank you for sharing your talent with us. I loved that Bella was the older and feared one here. I spent every spare moment I had reading it. Loved it, and love you!

I don't even remember how I stumbled upon your story but I'm so glad I did. I really enjoyed how your Bella acted very canon Edward and your Edward was very canon Bella. I also enjoyed how interesting you made this Bella...she's lived for quite a long time and instead of canon Bella being terrified of the Volturi, they were terrified of this Bella...super interesting spin to a story! I don't think I've read anything like that before. Oh and Edward can read her mind! So great being that Bella finds it difficult to communicate her true feelings to Edward.

I was so sad to see it end where it did! I wanted to read about the Cullen's coming for a visit...and Edward & Bella living more of their life together. I really, really wanted to read about Bella finally & completely giving herself over to Edward & being at peace with it. I know she has but she still has the fear he'll change his mind - that kind of left it a little unsettled for me but maybe that's the point - it will take a loooong time, if ever, for her to understand that Edward isn't going anywhere. Anyway, I just want MORE haha. It's been like a million years since you've posted this but I'm still going to follow the story in case you ever do a futuretake lol.

Thank you for this fic...amazing!

I hate people that have an issue talking about who they are, what they've done, where they've been, how they feel, etc. I just ….sigh...Bella really pisses me off. She wont talk about her necklace, where shes been, who she is, her gift, etc etc. Why even bother being around people?
Its chapter 6 and we pretty much know nothing about either of them.