I really enjoy this story
heartwarming and lovely

This was great!

I love this story with a passion. A lemon part two would be greatly appreciated, just sayin

Nobody was ooc. The mission to miscalculation and to Sasuke and Naruto's interaction was on the spot which leaves a feel like watching NS with a genre of Shounen-ai. Normally, I always linger on fictions I've fallen in love here for a couple of days before moving on something new that will pique my interest then forgot about it but this one was burnt on my mind and will always be on my top SasuNaru fics. It's perfect just the way it is. Idk if I'm exaggerating but its just the way I feel about it. I love every words, every happenings, and every feels. Somehow, it would seem a perfect way for Sasuke to realize his feelings for the dobe after something like this happens. The confession was perfect too. Few exchange words but the feeling was there. No sappy moments. Naruto's contemplation about love was so him. Don't ask me what my favorite part is. I'm sure my self I'll rant every moment that happens.

I'm a little disappointed of my self for the lack of vocabulary to describe how good is this beside the word "perfect". Just like how Sasuke and Naruto for each other. Fuck the canon.

Thank you for sharing such a great story.

This was beautiful

i want a sequel plzzss

This was an amazing and wonderful story

Very thoughtfully written! I really liked the interplay of characters in this story. The feelings between naruto and sasuke weren't over done, which I always find makes it less believable. I really liked the banter intermixed with the tension and uncertainty between them. Well done!

Please make a sequel!

Just throwing some love out there for this: I absolutely loved this story. It has everything. I practically consider it canon in my head and I'm sorry I never reviewed it before because it's brilliant. Thanks for writing!

This was great, I really enjoyed it. Read it listening to Sigur Ross and was like 'whoa...all my feels bro O.o'

I love how you cover all of Naruto's weirdness with love. In the series, he loves so freely but never gives a name to it if you know what I mean. It's like he's naturally inclined to that sort of thing but can't realise it or it'll confuse him because he's never actually seen it before.

Yeah, rambling. Anways, great writing, I shall be faving this so that I can come back and read it again heh

BEAUTIFUL!

About the weapon, I think I know exactly what you mean. It made me think of "barbed arrowheads" (I kind of litterally translated it from french which is my first language, but I think it's called that in English). Anyway, the only way to take them out was to push them all the way through. So I don't know if a "barbed kunai" is something that exist, but I think it's a good way to describe it.

Good story, by the way. It's really well written. I usually don't like Naruto and Sasuke as a couple, but I liked the way they interacted in your story. So, well done!

Their feeling is so emotional...!

That's nice...

Great...! :)

Wow, this was a great one-shot. Loved it!