Fantastic story!

great fic . just hope you did one for the flip side .

Very sweet story, I'm glad that at least John could help the other Aeryn feel better about herself and know she deserved something more.

I love this story! It's wonderful! I wonder why the David Kemper and the other Farscape writers never thought about someting like it. The whole emotional turmoil you put John through and which he also causes, is very well written and totally in character.

Really good writing!

I liked this. I've always been a sucker for alternate universe stories, I can easily see you doing a sequel or a prequel. My only comment is on some of the spelling, but, there are some great descriptions here. I definitely enjoy your writing. :)

I find this an imaginative idea, and played out in an interesting way. My only complaints would be I felt D'Argo was a bit out of character in the parallel universe. Being the family guy he is, I don't see him as wanting casual sex from someone (I won't mention her name here)any more than John; he would want her heart and soul. Also, it is obvious you are a shipper- too obvious, really. To me, the best romantic scenes occur when their actions speak louder than their words. Speaking of which, I notice you tend to have the characters speak out everything they say. I don't think they would necessarilly do this- much of it would remain unspoken in regards to the characters personality. But I always like a happy ending. Keep it up.

I really loved this story. Well done for making it work so beautifully. Thanks! Ali D :~)