my god these 2 are a mess. Eric is being a dumbass and Sookie... my god this girl is a fool. already having sex with Eric before explaing to the father of her child what is going down. nope. shes a friggin mess. as is this whole story. I really want to keep reading in the hopes that things will be spaced out better, like sentences and paragraphs but again, nope.

Unstable, indecisive, & P.S.Y.C.H.O.T.I.C. I just want to go out & find someone worthy of this Eric so he’ll stop torturing himself over this selfish twat & then drop kick this Sookie back to her fake normal life where she can pretend to be happy with her selfish, asinine behaviors & equally deceptive pseudo-husband.

Well, this Sookie is certainly in character with canon Sookie. Claude points out her ridiculousness & it’s suddenly Claude who is responsible for ruining her *cough* perfect life. She seems to have very, very little grasp of reality. Just minutes before she was thinking her son was so obviously part of the supernatural world, but she’s still pretending to be a normal human & telling herself she could have a normal human life with such vehemence that she throws Claude out telling him she doesn’t want to see him again because he had the audacity to speak truth to her delusions. Oh, & here she goes getting suspicious & pissed at Eric just because she only just learned that her 2nd/additional hubby is keeping the same kind of secret from her that she is from him. I bet Eric is single handedly responsible for global warming, the near extinction of at least a dozen animal species, fairy fertility problems, & the lack of world peace too. Gosh, he probably arranged for her pregnancy problems too. He is such a monster! Gah!

Typical idiot, bigoted Sam character. Instead of posturing like a nervous Chihuahua, accusing Eric of being some heinous criminal, he ought to be able to see that Sookie has multiple screws loose. It sounds like she pretty much just used this guy Mike as a fuck buddy, sperm donor, & home healthcare nurse ‘cuz I’m not seeing much evidence of her having love for the guy. Eric is the ‘monster’ that made Sookie’s ridiculous choices viable & safe by making arrangements for the protection & safety of HIS WIFE to go off to fuck, marry, & breed with some other man AND then sent his own blood to so she & these kids could be healthy. Yeah, this Eric is a real monster.

“... most of all I need to tell myself the truth and make up my mind as to whether I'm going to continue my so called normal human life, or if and when I'm going to be Eric's betrothed, or whether I'm going to carve out my own way.” SERIOUSLY? Seems to me she should have actually decided shit like this BEFORE she married some human poor clueless guy who she didn’t bother to inform about her already being married (much less blood bonded) to a vampire. She has some freaky-assed notions of what a ‘normal’ life & marriage are! It appears hubby is completely in the dark about nearly everything. What the hell was the point in marrying the guy then? If she didn’t want to have a human hubby who really knows her she could have just used a sperm bank to make babies &, even if she felt she had to move away from Bon Temps, there’s no doubt this Eric would have helped her financially (as he has helped with so much else). With all the secrecy, it seems like Mike’s income is about the only other input he has with this Sookie.

Yup — I’m thinking even more that she needs to ‘carve her own way’ straight to a psych hospital & let a sane, stable, rational adult raise her kids. Maybe Eric could just employ a nanny for them for the years Sookie needs in psych care while Pam glamours ol’ Mike into seeking a quick divorce (for his own well being) then glamouring him to forget Sookie & the kids exist.

This Sookie has some serious delusions & issues. She married some human guy but hasn’t trusted him with any information about who she really is or that the boy is telepathic like her? And she just loves this guy so much that she can’t seem to remember to even call him, the night of arrival or the next morning, to let him know she & the kids arrived safely & are settling in. Some lovin’ kinda marriage!

Hope my instincts are wrong, but she’s sounding like yet another version of Sookie who needs to be heavily medicated & seriously psychoanalyzed on a daily basis during a long-term stay in a mental health facility...

In sorry. I cannot finish this. So !ugh about this is intriguing that I want to continue, but the rest is just poorly worded.. I usually can get past that, but this was just too much.

Again, sorry!

I hate that you left it there

I'm really enjoying this story, which somehow I've managed to miss. It would be a lot easier to read if the dialogue was formatted properly. (New speaker, new line.)

Heard about this story on the SVM facebook site! Can't wait to read!

Best fan fiction i have ever read!****

I really loved your story and I can't wait to read your other one!I always wanted to know from another person what it would be like for Sookie to have a babie soo thanks for that it was awsome!I couldn't belive when you said C.H doesn't like fanfiction about her chactors(sorry about the spelling but my kids aren't here to tell me how to Do it ha ha)but she's okay with true blood that goes so far from the books that I have a hard time watching it because I don't know what the hell is going on half the time and who's story is it?Not the ones I've been reading not even close!Soat least most of the people that wright fanfiction say true to the oringall story line unlike the douch bags that wright true blood but she okay with that?!WTF?That woman needs to lay off the crack:-) !Thanks again for a great story!

Once I started reading this I couldn't put it down! Can't wait to start reading about the summit!

that was fun...it was the first Sookie fanfic ive read :D

Good chapter

What a fast paced and fantastical story, though I do feel bad for Mike.