Reviews for One Sister Away
Misty56 chapter 10 . 9/27/2011
You have to finish this fanfic
YAOIfangirl1996 chapter 10 . 4/23/2011
great! plis in the last chap some sex..ยท
xxPig.in.a.Pokexx chapter 10 . 2/13/2011
Please update soon. I will love you forever! I want to know how this story will end. I love it so far because you have a very great and unique writing style. good job dude
Lili chapter 10 . 1/27/2011
Its has good potential to penultimate a well rounded, classic puppyshipping fanfiction. You've done a wonderful job so far...go out with a bang :)

Thank you for the mention in a previous AN, I love you and your darn writing - I look forward to the conclusion of this story and any new stories you may write in future xx
Lili chapter 10 . 1/27/2011
One chapter left? There's so much to wrap up!

To be honest, I enjoyed this chapter more than its AFF counterpart for a number of reasons. Being the sap I am, I like happy families being played between Joey and Serenity - it was great to avoid a petty conflict between siblings that would have dragged the story on, good decision. Also, the extended interaction between Seto and Joey was much appriciated, the wam-bam-thankyou mam'ing of AFF chap 10 just didn't have the same charm.

Excuse me while I question aloud. Are Setos earlier comments (the whore and easy slurs) going to come back to bite him in the ass? Or will Joey just deal with it? I suppose if you adore someone enough, you'll take what you can get - but it would be awesome to have some kind of resolution there. I must know why Seto even made a move, its killing me! XD

Ohh! Tristie! I nearly forgot about him. I can't wait to see his reaction..poor baby :P

All in all, I'm very happy with this chapter -
Wolfs child chapter 9 . 1/14/2011
That was an amazing twist in the story I cant wait to see what you have planned for the rest of the story!
Radioactive Paradise chapter 9 . 1/10/2011
mmmmmmm intresting i like the plot hopefully seto says no
Guest chapter 9 . 1/8/2011
Hahah I laughed all the way through the last chapter (love yami) and now I'm on the edge of my seat with this one! Don't leave me hanging!

Updaaattte!
Demitria Miriam chapter 9 . 1/5/2011
wewt! Great job on this chapter, nomnom! Hopefully I can find you over on AFF. Cheers!

-DM
Demitria Miriam chapter 8 . 1/5/2011
rofl, I love it! Jealousy is always hot haha. Nice job!

-DM
Demitria Miriam chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
hehe I liked the suspicious stare from Kaiba in this, though you might wanna go back on this chapter to fix the html. Other than that, fabulous job.
Demitria Miriam chapter 3 . 1/5/2011
ahaha, I love these jealousy/love triangle fics xD So fun! Great job so far woot!

-DM
Wonkabonbon chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I love reading this, though I wish you would update quicker.
Tobiath Wyborn chapter 9 . 1/2/2011
OMGOMGHOMG ZOMG WRITE MORE REALLY REAL SOON!
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