Reviews for One Sister Away |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You have to finish this fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() great! plis in the last chap some sex..ยท |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon. I will love you forever! I want to know how this story will end. I love it so far because you have a very great and unique writing style. good job dude |
![]() ![]() Its has good potential to penultimate a well rounded, classic puppyshipping fanfiction. You've done a wonderful job so far...go out with a bang :) Thank you for the mention in a previous AN, I love you and your darn writing - I look forward to the conclusion of this story and any new stories you may write in future xx |
![]() ![]() One chapter left? There's so much to wrap up! To be honest, I enjoyed this chapter more than its AFF counterpart for a number of reasons. Being the sap I am, I like happy families being played between Joey and Serenity - it was great to avoid a petty conflict between siblings that would have dragged the story on, good decision. Also, the extended interaction between Seto and Joey was much appriciated, the wam-bam-thankyou mam'ing of AFF chap 10 just didn't have the same charm. Excuse me while I question aloud. Are Setos earlier comments (the whore and easy slurs) going to come back to bite him in the ass? Or will Joey just deal with it? I suppose if you adore someone enough, you'll take what you can get - but it would be awesome to have some kind of resolution there. I must know why Seto even made a move, its killing me! XD Ohh! Tristie! I nearly forgot about him. I can't wait to see his reaction..poor baby :P All in all, I'm very happy with this chapter - |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an amazing twist in the story I cant wait to see what you have planned for the rest of the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() mmmmmmm intresting i like the plot hopefully seto says no |
![]() ![]() Hahah I laughed all the way through the last chapter (love yami) and now I'm on the edge of my seat with this one! Don't leave me hanging! Updaaattte! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wewt! Great job on this chapter, nomnom! Hopefully I can find you over on AFF. Cheers! -DM |
![]() ![]() ![]() rofl, I love it! Jealousy is always hot haha. Nice job! -DM |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe I liked the suspicious stare from Kaiba in this, though you might wanna go back on this chapter to fix the html. Other than that, fabulous job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahaha, I love these jealousy/love triangle fics xD So fun! Great job so far woot! -DM |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love reading this, though I wish you would update quicker. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMGOMGHOMG ZOMG WRITE MORE REALLY REAL SOON! |