Hahahah like this one

Heyyy~ I read this in the morning today, and boy did i like it!
Actually, for a second there I'd thought that you forgot the storyline while writing lolol but it was immediately cleared up when I read further. Sasuke is /adorable/, he is love he is LIFE omfg.
Haha Naru was adorable too lolol but gdi this fic was so cute ty!

I loved it!

Yummy!

...There's public sex couches at the nightclubs where you live? Sounds unhygienic to do it on the same couches hundreds of other people have swapped fluids on, and in full view of the entire club no less. (Dance clubs shouldn't have the same tolerance for that sort of thing as a sex club. At least with a sex club you know they're going to sanitize everything at the end of the night. At the dance club...well, all I can say is I wouldn't want to get anywhere near those couches with a black light.)

That was the one part of the fic I didn't like. The pickup lines were funny and they were very sexy with one another, but I couldn't get past the fact that they didn't have the decency to use a bathroom stall or the backseat of Naruto's car. I like to think these two would ordinarily have a little more class than that.

gosh this was confusing when it started to seam like they actually knew each other. NOW I UNDERSTAND!

awesome story btw .

lol this was a good story ]

Hahaha Thiis is very funny. The ending word was just so hilarious.

Thanx

very well written, and hot :)

Hilarious. Cheesy pickup lines are always the best!

I love it :3

Damn! hot and sexy!

WOW! Awesome!

Cool story!

Roflamo, I love seme Naruto, yeah I knew it was coming though, I thought no way would Sasuke and Naruto do anything lovingly if they hadn't agreed to something before. But I picked the whole set up the moment Sasuke stroked Naruto lovingly. Hahaha..It was the best Naruto Birthday Fic I've read today! Excellent job woman you are soooooo awesome, and you should be proud of this fic, I know you're not happy with it but it was great, sweet, and funny!