Faved! I just, I just fell in love with this pairing!
Sorry for the late review xD I just played ToS like about a week.
Any another EmilxMarta Fict? Please? x3

amazing especaility how marta and emil are feeling and emil doing with his fears

Wow, it only took you that long to write this, and at such a late hour nonetheless? Color me impressed!

Very impressed really. This is a really well-written story. It's a really good look into Marta's thoughts and feelings on everything that has happened and will happen. It also shows how much she's matured since the beginnig of the game. What little there is of Emil's depiction is also very good. He is concerned and caring, admitting that he is frightened, but knowing what he must do. I am such a sap for fluff, so I loved the bit at the end, too. X3

This fic has a lot going for it. The description and details are well done, and it's very well paced. I even liked the short bit with Marta and the Orion. People seem to ignore monsters alltogeher in fics. It's nice to have a bit of interaction with one here.

So yes, wonderful job on this fic. I love it!

Wow, you completed this in only forty-five minutes? That's really impressive! And it's made even more so by how stealthy your errors are; they eluded me without a hitch.

It's the perfect representation of the calm before the storm-the sadness, the dread, and the comfort to drive them to the new day. Very good stuff.

I remember the review you left me for Starlit Wings, about how good you thought it was... I was so flattered, but after reading some of your amazing Symphonia stories I am blown away by the amount of skill you have. I think you should be an inspiration to me.

It is a true privilege to be able to read such brilliant writing. The way your wording flows is incredible. I felt so emotional when reading this and was very close to crying a little. Marta and Emil are so devastatingly underrated as a pairing that I almost want to rant about it. I'm one for the canon pairings, so I really love the fact that you're aiding the Emil and Marta section with such amazing pieces. I hope you keep it up! You have a loyal reviewer in me!

Last thoughts on the actual story... I really love how you include the monsters as their own characters-I tend to make up personalities for them as well. I especially love the Orion. One of my favorite monsters.

Marta's sadness really spoke to me, and this fit the character development she received throughout the game perfectly. In fact, all your characterization was perfect. I felt the powerful emotion so easily in here, as mentioned before. Having beaten the game, I'm happy to know Emil comes back and all. Reminded of how he almost didn't, it makes me want to reach out for them...

And, of course, I love the tiny hint of Colloyd in here. That's always a plus.

Brilliant. Amazing. Bravo. I'm impressed. Expect more reviews, as well as a huge thank you for having me under your favorites list when my work doesn't even come close to this.

-Kazea

This was so cute! You captured the emotion perfectly...just great!

Totally faving~

It was beautiful I LOVED IT :3 If you write more Emil x Marta stories I will def. read them 3

EmilXMarta does need more. Hell there just needs to be more stories with Emil in general.

This is wonderfully written. Very descriptive, and the emotions really show through! Great job on this, I didn't see errors. Amazing job!

What shocks me the most is how you managed to finish something like this in 45 minutes at a practically ungodly hour of the morning after many of us had retired.

Anyway, on to the work. Your skill definitely shines in what you've got here, and your little foray into Marta's mind was done effectively. I've found that with these sorts of introspection, people try to alternate between monologue and thought, and here there was a good balance of both.

A fine work for what you've got so far. I am eager to see more from you when the time comes. Cheers!

It'll be a while till me parents let me get another game *only limited someitmes only 4 per year, which is why I choose carefully* so I had to go through the walktrhoughs of this game XD awesome job there. You still amaze me with your abilitiy to write juast about any genre of a one-shot fic and more Keep it up! And uh, just reminding, Rogue of the Fallen's updated. Not all that great to tell you the truth, but you know XD

Very well written, indeed.

On a side note, I'd always believed that it was the (false) Ratatosk's Core that gave her magic.