Hi! I really liked your fic. I think it's full of good ideas, for instance implying at H-chan's gender promlems was quite well-placed. The portrayal of the other counties also made me smile, in a good way of course. They just felt familiar but supplemented with your own ideas :)
Anyway, I am from Hungary and would like to suggest a little correction: our word for bastard is 'fattyú' without a T. But I really appreciate the usage of different languages in Hetalia fanfictions, it can creata such an atmosphere ;) Keep on with the good work!

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Hey, i'm from Hungary and just wanted to tell you, "fattyút" doesn't mean anything in hungarian. You must leave out the t, like "fattyú", and that means some unwanted child, but they used to use it as an insult, so you got that right. "bastard" in hungarian is "szemét" or "szemétláda". just thought i'd let you know. nice fanfic. :)

what's "harem"?

Oh these two are so fiery together, and love the history included it. Especially enjoy that Hungary hasn't figured out yet why Turkey has her wearing women's clothing, but his last line made me chuckle.

This was really cute and I enjoyed reading it a great lot. Especially the last line, AWSOME!

TurkHun is one of my favorite couples and the way you described their relationship and personalities are great!

Szia!

It is late now, and I wanted to turn off my computer, but then I saw this little story, and clicked on it. And it was funny, I enjoyed! :D I didn't use to like this pairing, but it can be great if the author writes it well.

I found a little mistake: bastard is just "fattyú" in Hungarian, with the "t" at the end is in accusative. And Hungarians don't really use this expression for swearing, but that's not matter.

Thank you for writing it and letting me to read it (even if I said it incorrectly :D).

Greetings from Macaristan/Magyarország/Hungary: Loth (Turul rulez! I loved it very much! :D)

Ah, the sweet smell of crack in the mornings... ;D

Crack pairings, that is!

I must admit that Turkey and Austria are two characters that I never really warmed too, but I accidently clicked on a Turkey/Hungary AMV on Youtube a few days ago and... ever since then I've been OBSESSED! OBSESSED, I TELL YA! *A*

There aren't enough TurkHun fics on this site. D:

But anyway, I loved this! Bwahaha. Hungary is just -awesome-. Bless her, thinking she's a boy... XD

The ending cracked me up :D Heh.

Thanks for make a TurHun fanfic! There are so few in English! I'm honestly surprised. Well, maybe you're fine example of a great TurHun fanfic will set in motion other writers. Thanks for contributing such a well written fanfic of this pairing...

And if you want to write more TurHun fanfics that'd be great too... *hint hint* ;)

I love this story! Please post more TurXHun!

Omg, LOVE THIS! Trukey sounds so sexy here, and Hungary is epic! :p

Hi!

D'awwww, I liked this story a lot. TurkHun is one of the very few Hungary pairings that I ship. :D I especially loved the part where Egypt had to explain her... things. It was epic. :DD And Turkey was awesome. *_*

As for the vocab, I'd love to tell you that it's not "fattyút", it's "fattyú", because that 't' is only an accusative suffix. (I'm Hungarian) :)

Aaand again, it was lovely! Thanks for writing and sharing and stuff. Keep writing!

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This was really good! Nice job! I'm so happy someone finally wrote a TurkeyHungary fanfic; there aren't that many after all.

I also LOVE how you displayed Hungary's interactions with Egypt. Totally awesome story! XD

Oh god. Someone wrote good Turkey/Hungary. Thank you so much. I loved this to bits. I feel bad for Egypt having to explain that Elizaveta is in fact a girl while greece watched none the less. This was very amusing.

and the touchy feely parts were delicious. Please tell me you'll be writing more for this pairing in the future?

Forever and Eternally,

-Ra