Well written! I'd like to see Garrus' revenge :) and Shepard's healing process

Wow. I found this on the Mass Effect Kink Meme, and followed you here. Now, with full disclosure, non-con is not my thing, but you really hooked me. I really want a continuation of how Shakarian deals with the aftermath of this situation, i.e. much comfort and angst, heavy on the comfort. Sigh. You did a good job with an abhorrent subject, and I am not satisfied! : )

i didn't read it once you said rape BUT i felt that rape on shephard while with garrus... two extremely trained soldiers... srry but i laugh at the idea

I normally don't read this sort of thing, but I have to say you have quite a way with words! The only issue I had was how Shepard didn't really do anything when the Turians first came in the room. She just kinda let Garrus jump up and protect her, which is pretty ooc. Other than that bit though, I love it! Despite the subject matter being something I don't typically read or enjoy. I hope you update! It appers to have been a while since you've done so.

Waahh, this is so heart breaking! :( You portrayed it well.

I'm interested to see where you're going with this, considering your A/N. I will most definitely be keeping an eye on you... well, not in a creepy way.

Wow. I saw this on MK, I usually avoid non-con due to unpleasant past things, but because of that very fact I am also fascinated, especially if the writer takes it to the next level of "Yes this is rape, no this is not a fantasy, this is reality and it isn't pretty." Well done.

If this is a one shot, I will cry

All we need now is some aftermath... How Shepard deals and maybe some revenge? Like the return of Archangel (if even just to deal with these low-lives) or something?

Wow, that was incrediably dark! I'm very impressed that you had the courage to venture into such a dark theme. I always respect writers who do. Very good story! Please update soon

You did a good job with the subject matter. I understand where you're going with it and I'd be interested to see some more of the two wrestling with the aftermath...what it means to the crew, etc.

In terms of story content itself, I would have liked to see Shepard attempt to use her biotics or a weapon when the Turians show up in the room. She's a fighter and wouldn't just rely on Garrus to protect her - especially knowing what's going to happen. Also, I could see them retreating to a private room or even leaving but not necessarily jumping on each other after just having such an ugly encounter on the dance floor.

So, just my thoughts, there, but it's well written and I'd like to see where you take it.

K

Good story. Far from pretty subject matter and no doubt would have been tough to write, but you did a good job.