Oh I love this! Eliot understanding that out of all of them, he and Parker really are the lone wolves...and the ones who are the most alike. And now I totally want a story where Parker free climbs that rock face-or just climbs it. This was awesome. And good choice of songs!

I like it. :)

Apt.

Love the dry narrative and the casual references, they add realism to the piece.

Excellent.

that was great loved it

this is a nice short story... keep it coming