A beautiful end to an incredible story for sure. I'm sorry if it is seen as petty, but the only thing that could have improved this wonderful, creative and intricate story was a proofreader. As a college educated person, and a teacher myself I can't just ignore it. An error or two is not the issue, no one is perfect. However, such volume of errors does inhibit the enjoyment of the story..especially when the writer is clearly capable of brilliant content. Thank you for sharing your gift.

Very well said..I couldn't possibly agree more. It is my opinion that good parents today are rare. No one wants to be"the bad guy"; and make the tough decisions on what their kid should or should not be doing. So, they want to live in a bubble and have society policed to death so they don't have to be the parent themselves. I despise censorship because the country is free; and that freedom doesn't change because you don't like it. A brilliant writer once said" The definition of freedom is that someone has the protected right to oppose issues that you would spend your life defending. Both of you are correct; as long as you don't kill each other in the process".You have the right to ignore or not partake of anything you don't like. However, It is unfair, cruel and honestly just unconstitutional to deny others what they enjoy because it bothers you. What if something you hold dear offends me? Should it be taken from you because I say so? No one would agree to that. There are businesses I won't support because I don't like them, music and movies I won't watch and activities I won't do for the same reason. That is my choice, but I wouldn't try and deny someone else. Censorship is a veil in which cowards hide their hate and discrimination. Something isn't "inappropriate" because it isn't your taste. Keep the judgment in a court based on facts; not opinion. These stories are for adults, clearly labeled as such and if you find them objectionable yourself, or for your children..DON'T READ THEM! Be a responsible parent..it really is that simple. I know everyone is busy, and as a parent myself you get tired and stressed and have to find the strength. But, parenting is not a hobby or a part time job; it is a commitment over anything else. Don't expect society to ruin everyone else's freedom because you can't or don't want to parent your own kids. Thank you

Loving the story and totally hooked..just can't wait to see that slimeball get justice..The only thing I have to mention is..Edwin Stackhouse? Really? That had me totally confused for a minute, then I realized it was Amelia speaking to Eric and it was just the wrong name..even though this is an excellent story it has alot of characters and may be difficult for some to follow if the names aren't even correct. My apologies if this is offensive; but at the very least, the characters names should be correct everytime to avoid ruining the flow of a great story with confusion. Thank you

Really enjoying this story thus far, thank you. The character POV storytelling is a unique perspective and I'm am really enjoying it. I also love LOVE that even though the character "speaking" changes the story keeps moving along. I have read other stories that try to do POV changes, but they just keep telling the same scene from each perspective. While there is some value in that, it gets VERY dull. Kudos to you for keeping things smoothly on track, and your readers entertained. It always amuses me that the one common thread in all FanFic that I have read is what a skeezy, lowlife, lying scumbag Bil is..always just a little different, but always disgusting..it's WONDERFUL! Eager to see how this plays out, such a fun ride so far. Love the dancing and the music..my only critic would be to get a better Beta, or a separate proofreader. There are alot of grammatical errors that mar an otherwise excellent story. Just food for thought..on with the show

Just, want to thank you for your story.

Finished reading your very enjoyable story. What a delight to have a human Eric who wasn't just owning and running a bar. Impressed with how you set the stage with Sookie. Very impressed. Even more impressed with how dislikeable you wrote Bill & Lorena. Liked the plot, a lot. Your descriptions of their dancing were wonderful. You descriptions of the relationship buidling between Eric and Sookie were a delight to read. I was highly engrossed in your entertaining story. Thankyou.

I have a theory. Lorena is hadley.

I support this statement 100%. Imo pseudo-morality groups tend to be made up of people who themselves have plenty to hide, either from others or themselves.
In essence, they go after people who are open in order to justify their own lies, as Hoover did to gays, meanwhile having a string of his own boyfriends.
It's sad to see those in charge of Fanfiction enabling these scumbags.

A great story - enjoyed it very much indeed. I especially liked how you took the original bit-part characters and made them your own with only the names to remind us who they were in the CH books.

It had extreamly good parts and some really boring parts too.

why is she still with Bill?!
Can't wait for her to meet her dance instructor;)

Great story! Loved it!

Great story!

so awesome. great story

Well said!