That was absolutely adorable, I loved it! Just the right mix of sexy and cute.

Hahahahahahaha! That beginning was priceless! I seriously thought I was in for a lemon (which I was not complaining about, mind you. Shikamaru IS yummi) but it made me laugh the way the tables suddenly turned. And the kissing scene was fine, no worries ;)
Even though the whole wallet-mock fight-kiss routine is a bit of a cliché, it was nicely done. I almost want a sequel for it -but it would defeat the purpose of a one-shot...
:) Once more, very nicely done.

LOL it was very fluffy, but I had a nice giggle at the end. It was well written. I look forward to reading more.

LOVED IT :D make millions more drabbles please ! For me ? :) they're just super cute and I just can't help but love shikamaru 3

This... is hilarious XD

When I read the summary I were pretty much chanting "Please don't be a lemon, please don't be a lemon..." And it WASN'T! ;)

My face changed a bit like this while reading...

._., ._., ._, ., o., o.o, O.o, O.O, ., XD

It went from being wary, to giggle, to preparing for mental sccaring, to laughing my ass off XD

Love it...! ;)

Have a wonderful day! Or night! :D

/Jemsie

Ps: Please ignore any misspelings, I'm writing this from my phone... XD

This... is hilarious XD

When I read the summary I were pretty much chanting "Please don't be a lemon, please don't be a lemon..." And it WASN'T! ;)

My face changed a bit like this while reading...

._., ._., ._, ., o., o.o, O.o, O.O, ., XD

It went from being wary, to giggle, to preparing for mental sccaring, to laughing my ass off XD

Love it...! ;)

Have a wonderful day! Or night! :D

/Jemsie

Ps: Please ignore any misspelings, I'm writing this from my phone... XD

wow. can't believe this was really your first kissing scene. I'd wish you could make a Chiharu x Shimaru story, but I guess this is a way to start.

_ i really liked ur story, that was a great idea that u had to let Chiiharu get the wallet. good job

Heey! I loved it :D

I'm hoping you'll make a whole story about Chiiharu and her life in Konoha and how she met Shikamaru! :D

I also want to be your friend here on FF :D so please answer my review? :D