great story hope to read more soon keep it up

Is it bad that I feel worse for Carl than Kyrie? Totaly got shunned. Poor guy lol. (Tis Tsuki btw~ lost my account info and was easier to find this one xD)

Awaiting the next chappie~

I can't wait for more!

Oooou, nice chapter! But poor Alyssa TT And teasing? tsk tsk on j00. Ima tell your papa! lol But yes that would be funny to see :p

Keep up the good work~

Teasing Wesker now I'd like to see that! XD Nice chapter!

Okies so, even knowing nothing about Resident Evil I still like this story and find it easy to follow! I admit you have me hooked on your story. I want another chapter! I did see a couple typos, but I cant really complain bc I do that more than anyone. So, great story so far! 3 Keep up the good work.

~Uppppdaaaaate sooooon ;)

Awesome love it hope you write more soon :):):)

JAPAN! The best place to be with Wesker! But good luck with figuring him out. I've been writing about the guy for over three years and yet he still eludes me. XD

You have got to be kidding me. If you are, I'll go ahead and applaud. If not... well...

Even if you put all the typos/grammar errors aside, this would still be bad. A Mary Sue? Wesker acting like some kind of nancy poster boy that is OMG SOOO HAWT? I think you managed to hit just about everything that's wrong with the RE fandom here.

No one is going to... steal your 'original' idea (which, by the way, isn't original in the slightest. Do you know how many stupid little teenagers there are going ga-ga for Wesker and writing these idiotic little stories where their self-insert meets him and OMG THEY LOVE EACH OTHER! ? A lot, darling. A lot.).

Now, because I'm only half a monster, I'll give you some pointers.

-First person POV (I, me, my) is rarely done well. I think you would do a lot better in third person. 'I turned around as a surprised gasp escaped from my pale chapped lips.'. For one, she can't see her own lips are pale. Two, gasps don't usually come out of other places, so just 'I gasped' (no 'surprised' needed, people can work that out by themselves).

-Keeping a character IN CHARACTER (IC) (and not acting like your character's/your ultimate fantasy boyfriend because you consider him hot) is a good thing. Wesker kills people who aren't any use to him. He's a stone-cold sociopath. Didn't you see what happened to his last fangirl, Excella? If you truly liked his character, you wouldn't bastardise him.

-Writing down your character's appearance/what they're wearing at the beginning of a chapter isn't a good thing. For one, the readers don't care, and for another, it's not important. It's just a sign of bad writing and that you want to slap us in the face with what your precious character is wearing.

-The ol' 'Baaawww, I have a sad background' cliché (which is also a sign of a Mary Sue). I'm not saying that no characters should ever have a tragic background, just that it's often used in a lazy effort to make us feel sympathy towards the character. There's also the fact that your character just randomly brings it up. Have a little bit of mystery in there, don't just throw everything at us. We should feel for your character because of what they do and how they react - not just because 'all her family died in Raccoon, oh boo hoo'.

-Your page breaks. Dear Jesus. In case you're confused, it's that sickening '((((((((((((((((( ((O_O)) ))))))))))))))))))) KEEP READING R&R' thing you do. What is that, a really fat Pikachu? Try using simple lines. Whatever program you're using for writing, several underscores in a row often auto corrects to a line break, which looks far better. If it doesn't auto correct, or you don't just want to use a line, even several dashes or something like '-x-' would suffice. If you were aware of all this and wanted to use your fat Pikachu anyway, God help us all.

-Having your character refer to Wesker as things like 'the blonde hottie'. I realise that some people are slutty enough to actually think things like this, but it makes her sound like she's fourteen years old and gossiping with her friends over some guy in a boy band. Oh, also, 'blonde' is for women- the term used for describing males is 'blond'.

Now then. If you're serious about writing, work harder. Strive to be better. Break out of what's easy and what you consider to be good. Read and learn. Everyone has the potential, even you Wesker fangirls. If you're not serious, go back to your terrible writing about how hot you think Wesker is. Don't listen to me. Drift in your fantasy world where one-line reviews of 'I LOVED IT, UPDATE SOON!' by people who only like the story because their favourite character is in it are considered the highest compliments you can get. It is entirely up to you.

This is great :D

I LOL'ed at Weskers ringtone, how fitting haha.

Cant wait to read an update, keep up the fantastic work (:

Oh! Nice twist!

Your welcome! This story is defiantly interesting! I can't wait for more!

Good chapter! "But whatever you do don't trust the hottie in shades." XD