Nice and next CH please

I thought Ash and Pikachu had already established with each other that they weren't going to evolve him. Why does he forget this when he walks into a cave that happens to have thunderstones? I feel like Ash is being that parent that forces their kid to do something they absolutely hate, even though its not the parent themselves who have to go through and live with the consequences of what they have to do (living with a new body).

Amazing story to bad it hasnt continued

So far awesome stroy woud like for Ash and May to have a fight break up and then after 2 chapters get back togehter it could be interesting besides i really dont think Ash would be the one who thoughts if pikachu has to evolve he would only do it if its necessary and he would never say something like he cant get stronger but still cool strory 4.2/5

It's an interesting story and all but where's the next chapter I hope this fanfic hasn't been abandoned or forgotten I want this fanfic to continue please update it

Lucas, Dawn, and Paul? Now that is an interesting trio. Dawn must hold grudges, interesting, lol...

Turquoise: May that's just mean...

May: -smacks Turquoise on the back of her head and pulls by ear to a small lonely room-

Turquoise: NOOOOO! I hate small enclosed spaces It's like I have ADHD no wait I kinda do...

Did you have Ash and May wear the Unnova Pokemon trainer outfit

one thing i want to ask
isnt raichu way to big to be on ash's shoulder now that he's not a pikachu anymore

i think you may want to change the word issu into unova since most people may not know what issu means

It's har to tell when may was in a dream or reality so if you could put some line breaks in there it would help a lot

Great story! To be honest, the first time I started reading it after Pikachu evolved, but i came back. And whats with all the Japanese names?

This story is great! I can't wait to see what happens next! I think Ash is less dense this way.

this is great! :)

cool story