I love this story! I've now read it 3 times and laugh and sigh each time. You are so right about there not being enough sweet stories about our favorite couple. I don't always like the vulgar ones and don't believe that either would ever be vulgar. Maybe 1 or 2 f-bombs during the act but that's about it. I like your take on it very much.

ahah thats funny.

Hello. Liked the story! Loved all the details! Thanks, Suzan Noerr

I like Edward like that..No longer virginal and uptight...thanks for writing it. lol

Prudeward is gone! *fist pumps* :DD

That was really great and well-written! Plus, jealous Edward really lets his guard down. Satisfied me in ways BD didn't! Thanks for sharing!

Very cute and hot! Nice combo.

Nice job, I loved your story.

Just amazing...i am speechless or rather typeless (if that makes sense)

wow that was story.

Really great Lemon and really sweet as well.

:-) :-) :-)

Loved it!

This is great! I loved the lustful thoughts of the other boys in their class. You build up to the bedroom scene really well. And the sex is just... wow. It's hard enough for me to write lemons in English as my first language, but your prose is just seamless.

I'm with you, by the way. I don't buy Edward's unparamounted sexual restraint in canon. He inhabits the body of a seventeen year old, and he's in love. Of course he wants sex with his girlfriend.

Well done.

I'm looking forward to reading the epilogue now.

:-)

this is a good story well done

Oh...mi...freaking...gosh...

This waz anazizng

i loved it but then again i lov all ur storiez

i probably sound like a broken record ur most likely getting sick of me lol

i loved this

so freaking hot!

Ur an amazing writer gurl

i cnt wait to read more of ur stufff! XD