I came back for a reread because I really like this story. Thanks for sharing.

Love this story but I have never understood Lauren's comment about the muddy brown dress and sun hat.

I thought you did an excellent job on the story. I adored your Esme. She's my favorite thing about this story. I loved how caring, loving, and protective she was of her children and how she accepted Bella was one of her kids. I lol at her hitting Edward with a rolled up magazine after he hurt Bella after the Ball.

I also loved how all of the Cullen kids took Bella in as their little sister and protected her. I loved Jake and the Pack Boys. They were doing everything to those evil bastard who hurt Bella that I wanted to do. I really enjoyed Paul's relationship with Bella. He and Laurent made a cute couple.

Edward, Emmett, and Alice calling their biological parents by their first names irk me. It may be old fashioned, but it's disrespectful to call your Mom or Dad by their names, even though you explained why you did it.

I enjoyed your varied use of so many Twilight characters and the creative spin you put on them. I also enjoyed the characters you added such as Jasper's parents and Dean. The writing was often raw, emotional, and many times brutal, but you tempered it well with humor and family bonding. Great job and thank you for sharing with us.

Wow! Loved it. So much in few chapters I didn't realize how close to the end I was. I was lost in the story. Any more or dragged out drama/healing and it would have been down hill. You got your point out and time frames without effort. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.

I lose track of where I get my story recommendations from but I'm so glad I put this on my TBR list! I loved it!

I hope they don't forget the mayor. He covered up rapes and murder.

i loved it so much gore

I loved this. .. It would be cool to have a spin off of paul and Laurent. ..

Thank you. I enjoyed this story!

Well, I liked how she and the others were handled. What losers.

Now someone needs to get this Dude and put him out before he hurts anyone else.

They all got what they deserved. It's too bad retribution on that level doesn't happen more often especially in cases where it is deserved. Most of the perverts get thrown into prison on the taxpayer's dime and it just isn't cruel enough for what they have done. Or worse- they get away with it.

And he beat up Angela because?

Jacob and company know no mercy. They go after those idiots with a passion. Couldn't believe Renee showing up either. She and Phil are soul less. They just took Bella's money and spent it on themselves. Bella really has some winners in her life. It is too bad that Charlie had to die.

That damn Lauren got what was coming to her. She was out to get Bella and ended up getting taken out by the very people she wanted to go after Bella. Lauren was just stupid and made very poor choices.