i love. Now I am going to go read the sequel. Until next time, ja!

Tam~chan

cool sotry! im gonna add it to my c2. come subscribe and support! )

What a great story! Please write more like this please! Oh and how did you learn so much japanese?

Great story (sniff) thanks for putting it up...Good thing there's a sequel or I'd be crying all out right now. I always cry when I finish a good book.

By the way, they're getting MARRIED when they're only SEVENTEEN?

.~_~. That chapter is so touching...

LOLOLOLOL! Oh my god! That chapter was SO funny!

"Shizuka ni"...hm, I better remember that one. Good chapter. And I think the falling asleep problem you have is not after all related to the effort expended in your writing...Rather, it is far more likely your eyes and mind have been mummified from staring at the screen so long. it's called "idiot box syndrome", even though, in recent times, it has more commonly occurred with a computer instead of a telivision.

Tomoyo and clothes is almost worse than Kero and pudding.

Is authors unite anything like weirdos of the universe unite? And what's the significance of the number fifteen?

Had always bothered what?

OH my...

Ok, so I was wrong. Good way to get yue involved, though.

No way he's going to beat her with just two critters...

Ok, Is this villain just supremely unintelligent or what? If he wants to defeat Sakura, all he'd need to do is send about twenty spirits at once. She'd faint from exhaustion by the time she got to the tenth. As is, he's just strengthening her!

LOL. That bed comment sounds awful familiar...Good chap! I won't even bug you about conventions, despite the errors...for once I'll leave you to find them yourself.