nice

Well done!

Hehe, that ending was adorable. :3

There are no words to describe how much I LOVE this story! I know it's not part fo your usual work, but I hope we might see some oneshots of this pair again. Not a lot of good Renegade Shep out there, and you seem to have a GREAT on here.

Also, this is a wonderful way of showing how the crew might respond to LoSB without it becoming a huge deal. It's short, yet manages to portray an entire history in a few short sentences.

In a word? Beautiful.

This was both heartwarming and funny, and it made my morning! It was so very different from the picture painted by the summary, and for that, I am glad; this was WAY better than what I imagined! :D

It makes me happy that you chose not to go the "I'm hurt that you apparently don't trust me," route with this Shepard. Not that such scenarios aren't believable, but given how many secrets any one of us keeps on any given day, I'd say that Shep knows why people keep things to themselves. Well played. :)

This was a really fun story. I've been looking for stories that deal with what the dossiers in the shadowbroker's stronghold said, particularly the one about Garrus. This deals with it very nicely. My Shepard was pretty upset that Garrus didn't tell her about what was going on with his mother and didn't get her to help.

Great story. Would love for you to do a follow-up on this one.

Very fun to read and I'm really glad someone mentioned what the Shadow Broker file said about Garrus. I think my Shepard was kinda pissed too. I'm surprised more people haven't written something about it. Anyway, great writing and I got a kick out of your Shepard making Garrus do a run through the base naked. Great revenge ;)!