I thought it was great and no kaori is kind of a bitch lol I hope u continue the story, anyway it was a nice chapter.

WOOT :), I liked this. Hope there will be another chapter to show what happens with Kaori, and if Jun will get a gf or something close to it. Im sort of glad that Akiko didnt let him get any more than just a feel, she indeed is far too caring to let such an act go even that far. Kaori... seems like she would flip on Jun like that, providing he made the mistake of not doing what she asked, but jun seemed like more of a wimp than in the anime xD. All in all, This was awsome, hope to see more, but if not.. Good work