Fabulous! Much better than canon. Potter got what he deserved, the world was spared his get, and Snape presumably got Lily, making all right with the Hogwarts world. Now if Dumbledore and Voldemort had mutually annihilated, everything would have been perfect.

Not really bashing since Potter is perfectly in character here. Bashing would be making Ron Weasley a rapist. (Yes, I saw one of those. I don't care for the canonical ship - he and Hermione don't fit at all - but I certainly do put some things past him.)

Haha, amazing! Sometimes I like James, but this story made me laugh:)

loved it!

LOL thats so cute lmao and funny lol he just leaves the book there when he was like so keen on getting it a few secs ago ROFLMAO ggreat story ;) keep up the good work

l8er~

I guess there won't be any minature Potheads running around in this story. Serves the stuck-up, arrogant git right! Good riddens to bad rubbish! I hope Sev sterilizes Black, too. Sev's right about the Black's - way too much inbreeding there, because they're either insane or unable to grow up.

Nice should wirte more chapters because I really enjoyed this one-shot!

A good story a pity the Potter line has ended but Severus got the girl and both were happy things are as they should be.

Peter really is worthless I bet if Ron had been an only child he would have been just like Peter.

If there is no counter to the spell Severus created he could end the war before it starts as pure bloods value their heirs above all else at the very least Severus and Lily would be left alone.

I look forward to your next story.

You realize that what Snape did here was absolutely monstrous?

Not only would Remus never take this lying down, Lily would never ever go for Snape if she found this out. I would most certainly hope it was reversible or temporary. I'm all for Lily/Snape fics, but if this spell did what you describe, then it's an incredibly horrific thing to do to someone, and not something that either of the Gryffindors would tolerate... in my opinion anyway.

Cheers,

Sam