I feel bad that JJ and Cate had to go through what they had, in the loss of Will LaMontayne, but it looks like they're both on the road to recovery. I certainly hope that there is a sequel to this great story somewhere. Another great chapter/great story!

Another great chapter! I certainly hope that Hotch and JJ will be able to convince Cate to stay at her Birthday Party! It seems as though Cate is still having a tough time with the loss of her dad. I certainly hope that JJ and Cate will be able to get back to normal soon.

Another great chapter! Glad to that JJ is allowing the team to spend time with her and Cate. She even sported a small smile at the scene in her apartment, finally realizing that she had been blessed with the team as friends.

WOW! That was some moment between JJ and Derek! It was so sweet and tender! I'm glad that Derek was with JJ, and that he made her realize that the team was there for her. I was also glad that Penelope Garcia was able to get to JJ, reminding her not to shut the team out. Another great chapter!

Another great chapter! I'm glad that JJ is letting the hurt come to the surface, as she needs to stop trying to cover up the pain she is feeling, concerning the death of Will and the fact that today should have been their Wedding Day. I certainly hope that JJ will be able to get back to normal life.

Another great chapter! I really feel bad for JJ. This was supposed to be the most happiest day of her life, because this was supposed to be her Wedding Day! This would've been the day she and Will LaMontayne would've exchanged their Wedding Vows! I certainly hope that JJ will be able to get through this day.

Another great chapter! It was awfully sweet of Jack to offer to share Hotch with Cate! Another great scene was when Jack got off of his father's lap in order to let Hotch work on Cate's scraped knee, while he sat on JJ's lap! Just a very sweet scene!

JJ's right! It's going to take a while to get back to normal! JJ's going to have to have a little more patience with Cate. I'm really glad that Hotch is there for JJ and that he told her what happened when he came back to work after Haley's death. I certainly hope that JJ realizes that it's okay to have a moment of weakness and that it doesn't make you look bad. Another great chapter!

Another great chapter! Such a touching and tender moment between mother and daughter! Very, very sweet! It looks like JJ and Cate will be just fine. Great job!

Another great chapter! I really like the fact that this story is a realistic rendition of what a person that has lost a loved one. The person goes through great sadness for a while, and sooner or later, they may find some normalcy, and then the healing begins slowly but surely. I certainly hope that JJ will be able to get some comfort and that the pain goes away. Great job!

Another great chapter! WOW! This had to be hard for JJ, but she handled the eulogy for Will LaMontayne with great class! JJ is a class act!

Another great chapter! This was totally well-written! I really liked the way you're handling the subject of death. I also liked the way you had JJ apologizing to her little daughter, Cate. You have portrayed this story in a realistic fashion. Great job!

Another great chapter! I really like the way you have written this chapter! As a matter of fact, I really like your story period. I was glad with the way the team came together for JJ. As your story goes forward, JJ's going to need the team's support as she takes her journey through this tough time. Great job!

Another great chapter! Poor JJ! She's going to have to live her life without Will in it. I certainly hope she'll be able to carry on.

Great start to what promises to be a great story! When Chief Erin Strauss comes to the BAU Unit Chief Aaron Hotchner and Agent David Rossi, you can just hear the Dragnet tune in your head! Something serious is about to happen! I certainly hope JJ will be fine.