Such a bummer this fic isn't complete, it totally sucked me in, super interesting story!

Oww incomplete...?
Such a shame...

ahh this story is so good... I'm so sad i finished reading it...

oh no, oh nooooo... I wasn't expecting that, nice job once again :)

oh it's so good... i don't know what to say...

ahh great really... so cute *.* I'm scared for what is going to happen later with Szayel though...

this sotry is amazing :) Every chapter so far, I want to comment but i am getting hooked up in the story that i immediately start reading the next chapter...

This chapter is pure perfection :)

J'adore! La suite pour bientôt j'espère! :)

This story is gold no matter now many times I read it! It would be fantastically awesome if you were to continue it, or at least drop us a note letting us know if it's dead in the water. I'd rather you finish it, but, yeah, kinda biased here XD

Your story was, I have to say, pretty incredible. I'm quite the critique. The only thing I can say is the spelling of Sylvi or silvi changed between the chapters of the pie baking contest whenever she was mentioned before. I really wish you had continued this work of art. Not many can capture the couple so wonderfully. However, since it was 2012 the last time you updated the story I can imagine you've lost interest or have forgotten about it entirely. I wish you the best and hope you continue writing.

WRITEEEEEEE MOREEEEEE

YO WRITE MORE PLEASE

I love how you continued this from OiH! And this chapter in particular, my god, i couldn't stop laughing! Really!
I can picture it now: Kenpachi moving through the halls of a school like a mass of walking mountion. The 'big jocks' flee in terror, mere mice in the presence of this mighty BEHEMOTH!
Using Szayel as the main antagonist was also a great use of a 'dead' character. All his posessions and Nyle's face-sculpting is creeeeeeeepy! (And very believable!)

This is really worth continuing and something that I really enjoy reading, especailly in your writing style. Decent sized chapters with good substance and enjoyable content! AND GRAMMAR! PRAISE BE!
:D Sincerely loooking forward to more!

BlueSpiritFire1

Ah, I'm so very excited! The little romantic scenes are so adorable and DAMN! It was perhaps the best idea ever to bring Zaraki and Yachiru into the fic (lolling forever for the Uncle Kenny :'D) Keep up the good work. Can't wait until Inoue and Renji get a bit more intimate, maybe a longer kisses and a bit making out IF that happens that is!