Wow...LOVE IT!

I just love this story! It's really great and the ending was funny!
Happy new year, Meyli.

great story!

omg. Almost 3 hours? The FBI were slow, weren't they.

I love it that it's Peter fault and then he managed to save Neal back and kept him awake with goats. That's a great ending!

LOVED! So good. As much as I love whump and hurt Neal I don't mind this way too. I'll let my fantasy sail away with its own continue ;)

Greatly written. I could feel Peter's concern and fear through your writing.

Great story ! I enjoyed reading it. :)

Oh my, you had me scared for a moment there. I'm glad that Peter's mistake did not cost Neal his life. Nice story, really suspenseful!

Kind Regards,~ Gg

I love the end(: however you did male me cry! I thought you had killed off Neal...but I'm very glad you didn't! Great story!(:

Haha, I liked the ending! This was really cute! :D

Loved this two-shot. I'm a fan of Peter angst, Neal angst, and, for some reason, underwater drama. ;) Good job :)

haha love neal's disorientation at the end!

you've only just begun. This story has so much potential! please continue :)

Just found this story and really enjoyed it. I thought you had a nice grasp of the characters, and I also enjoyed the action. (Plus, a little Neal or Peter whumpage always makes for a good read. :-)

I'm definitely going to look for more of your stories. Thanks for sharing!

Just caught up with all your WC stories. Enjoying them very much.

This story grabbed me right away. Very descriptive and exciting.