Reviews for Little Red String
DiamondBackNeko-chi chapter 18 . 9/5/2017
I'm glad everything worked out, and I really like that you explained their lives after the war. I always wanted to know, and even though Korea explained things, I still like how you summed up their happily ever afters.
Anonymous chapter 18 . 12/28/2014
Oh. My. Freaking. Gosh. This is like one of the best fanfics I've EVER read!
I mean with Lake Laogai, and then with the catacombs, and then with Boiling Rock, and then with everything else- WOW!
And then with the end of chapter 17, you almost had me there with Jet actually dying!
And the way you wrote Zuko and Jet's relationship is fantastic!
So yeah, just want you to know that I absolutely love this fic SO MUCH! :D
Guest chapter 18 . 11/8/2012
AMAZING story! A bit OOC but fantastic nevertheless. Awesome work
DustHallow64 chapter 16 . 7/29/2012
Gaang- clever wordplay man
ForTheLoveofJeevas chapter 18 . 1/10/2012
So, uh, this is my second or third time reading this story. I absolutely just love it 3 it's adorable and sweet and cute. However, I do agree with the reviewer that said Jet would have been training in prison. But, that was the only real ooc moment I saw. I thought it was really believable and I really wish the series was like this and Jet hadn't...well...yeah. Anyways, like I said 3 love this
GaaraLover1298 chapter 18 . 10/28/2011
Loved it! You scared the shit out of me when jet died well done I did not see him coming back to life so congrats xD
Aureate Wings chapter 18 . 10/21/2011
A story that makes your heart flutter and accurately repaints the characters we cherish. The story's deviation from the original series plot gets steamy and dramatic. The author has fulfilled every Zuko/Jet fangirls' dreams.
Safiiri chapter 18 . 9/24/2011
Wonderful story, I enjoyed reading every bit of it :)
treena-ivy-carter chapter 18 . 7/25/2011
Awe...sweet ending.
treena-ivy-carter chapter 7 . 7/25/2011
Did Jet nearly die?
treena-ivy-carter chapter 5 . 7/25/2011
Uh...Jet? Yeah that's how Zuko says he loves you. I mean with Mai, it's "I don't hate you." so I'm pretty sure "I like your kissing" sums up all his feelings for him right there.

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treena-ivy-carter chapter 4 . 7/25/2011
If you don't have hope...you could always focus on making out with your new boyfriend, right Zuko? ;)
WhatWillBe chapter 2 . 2/17/2011
I like this story so far, my only complaint would be that Zuko was a little too quick to sharing his secrets cause he's kind of a closed off character but maybe Jet just has that affect on people. Anyways, love the first two chapters, off to read the rest...
RaptorHonks chapter 18 . 1/26/2011
You are a very good writer keep it up, I hope to see more Avatar stories from you. you should feel very proud of this story, because if I was you I know that I would feel extremely good.
Jealousy the Greeneyed Monster chapter 18 . 1/6/2011
If the string is invisible, how do you know it's red? o.O

Anyway, I loved your story! :3
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