| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Rejected Path |
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Wandering Immortal chapter 33 . 7/30 I'm glad to see that this story wasn't abandoned, and that I found it again. I hope to read more. |
ArkhCthuul chapter 6 . 7/28 Ah well, can't say. I. Would have thrown a younger Monica Bellucci out. But still, the overt sex focus is starting to be too much... |
ArkhCthuul chapter 5 . 7/28 King Harold? OK, mcuh better than the over exposition the last few chapters had. And going for the political power is rare ill keep reading. |
ArkhCthuul chapter 4 . 7/28 Most likely because a fidelius is a trusted partner in at least 2 languages. Jkr... |
ArkhCthuul chapter 3 . 7/28 Talking talking talking... Really not a good chapter in any shape or for especially given he swallow everything Luna tells him even quicker than before he did Dumbledore shit. I'll give this. Story. At most 2 more chapters Chance to get better. |
ArkhCthuul chapter 2 . 7/28 Don't know if I like where this seems to be going. Maybe next chapter will have less. Sex and expose droppings. |
et-reader97 chapter 18 . 7/29 I like the bit with Millicent at the end. Even if it's not a lasting pairing I like it when charecters that aren't given the spotlight are made more important and I love it even more when there are pairings that aren't used as much. Also not just in this chapter but I like that you have little bits either in the chapter or in a note at the end about history facts like with chamberlain and hitler. Keep up the good work. |
Scarecrow94 chapter 1 . 7/29 Thank you |
et-reader97 chapter 10 . 7/29 Great chapter and I know it's small but I liked the part at the end with dobby innocently say that he should have the shower enlarged because of all group activity going on. It was hilarious. |
et-reader97 chapter 6 . 7/28 Nice chapter, the curse you have Harry's ancestor cast on the Malloy line reminds me of Harry Dresden and how wisawrds can say a death curse on there enemies. Keep up the good work. |
et-reader97 chapter 4 . 7/28 Damn great chapter. The part with the director made me feel like I would think Harry felt in that moment, I mean other authors have had the guts bliss like Harry before and treat him with a degre of respect. But few stories I've read made it seem so significant. Keep up the good work. Ps. I forgot to post a review in the last chapters but I love the Harry/Luna moments. Their my favorite pairing. |
ReneeEAD chapter 33 . 7/27 I love so many concepts and little changes you’ve introduced over the course of this tale. My favorite however has to be Minerva as Dumbledore’s Bellatrix. It’s is so apt even as a description for canon that I’m shocked I didn’t see it before. Thank you! I’ve come to this story late but apparently with good timing as you returned to it. Thank you for entertaining us and I look forward to more! |
Zarroc789 chapter 15 . 7/26 Found this story and up to this point I am very happy. Great work. I am sad that it took me so long to find it though. |
dienis chapter 3 . 7/25 idk this Luna's reasoning here. Gods, fate, this is more of a manipulation or a thinking error. "A pawn can become a queen" is somewhat true of course but then the queen is going to command the pawns afterwards anyway, so nothing really changes, just a switch of roles. And the life dictates it the way that you can't disregard lots and lots of what the current queens are doing as exsessive just cuz "you're not the first to dislike it". Overall a wizard could easily get by without the rest of the society. They have sturdier bodies, hunting for them is too simple (charms for smell removal, silence, invisibility), accio something from the forest like mushrooms or berries, etc. Charming territory so that others don't enter. Healing themselves, transfiguring some tools. Or just getting by in muggle society by doing some reparo business, fixing stuff. It's not like muggles who somewhat have to struggle on their own and tend to get together to hold through this world's unpleasantries (though at the same time getting different additional unpleasantries as well through the 'sins' of society). And as Potter feels like getting away from the country where he's unwelcomed, he still has choices and ways to ascertain his own safety (the only problem is getting sure he wouldn't be detected through the means of something like blood search). And if he just can't do anything other than that then why even continue, cuz that way you may find yourself as a programmed machine that can't do anything else other than following the script untill it breaks? And as one doesn't like the script then what is left? |
Ptolemys pyjamas chapter 33 . 7/13 A great work. Characters can be a bit too melodramatic at times and while I do believe there's no such thing as too much sex, this story puts that to the test. Still, really good. |