Ruined, absolutely ruined this fic

His whole "I have the moral high ground" reasoning makes me physically Ill, yea you have the moral high ground but he still tortured,experimented on and forced you to kill your would be wife didn't he? So I'm chalking that up to another win for Saleon. Saleon 2. Ian 0.

As much as I absolutely love this fic him needing to be saved repeatedly on one mission is really annoying (this makes what, three times?) I hope that in future chapters you fix this problem but right now I'm torn between enjoyment and irritation.

The moral high ground does help when you bring a sniper rifle

You’d think Udina would know the first human C-sec investigator/detective (according to MtM) and who is also largely responsible for more humans also being hired in the same role.

Good 5

"I've played Assassin's Creed, girl, you can't outsmart me."

Doom by think I ever heard that one before. Gotta admit, pretty d**n hilarious. Love the chapter.

I like the fact that you’re ditching the three squad members mechanic it’s there because it’s a game in reality that wouldn’t be there I’ve read a bunch of self inserts and they always seem to go with the three squad mates mechanics I like the fact it’s gone

A wonderful first Chapter

THE FEELS!

You won the bet... GODDAMMIT!

So i just read where tali and ian get together and i can't help but think that the scene was a little rushed. Perhaps you should of gone with just asking for a date then have that scene come afterwards.

To bad MA3 didn't give us what we wanted for Tali.

War...War never changes.

Did you ever get Tali that Geth info from their invasion in the Armstrong Cluster?