I was so glad to have stumbled on this fanfiction and read it within two days in between preparing for my final assignments at uni. I absolutely adored this fanfiction and truly wished there were more Alois/OC fics... I feel that people hate Alois simply because he doesn't exist within the manga world. To be honest, he is one of my favorite characters of the anime.

All aside, a small critique: towards the later chapters, in particular when the soul of Alois had already been devoured by Hannah, you kind of lost me as Alois went between these parallel realities; however, I admire that you tried to create your own world of what it looks like after a demon takes the human soul. I give you credit for that because it was extremely imaginative in ways that most authors would not consider. They would have simply stopped where it was and left it at that-at least I would assume.

The epilogue, in some ways, was eerily creepy and endearing all the same. I do admire Hannah in some ways just because of this final chapter... that she, as a demon, can still try to make a happy ending happen despite the misfortune that came upon their souls.

Brilliant work, but so many unanswered questions. I really enjoyed this, and hope you have more Black Butler fanfictions on your profile... I'm going hunting. :)

Thank you for this lovely story :). As many others have said, you did an amazing job with keeping everyone in character. The whole fic was chillingly dark without being too obviously angsty, a pretty amazing achievement considering it was also appropriately kept within the ''T'' rating bounds. Overall a very memorable and refreshing read.

I was a little disappointed with the later chapters though :( So many unanswered questions! WHAT WERE THE TERMS OF REMY AND HANNAH'S CONTRACT? WHERE DID HER BROWN EYE COME FROM?

With all that being said, you have a wonderful talent for writing, and I look forward to reading more of your work!

NOOO WHATTTTTTT. UGH

*small squeal* they're adorable

Yayy to miniscule romance. Remy's utter stoicism is really refreshing to see in an OC.

''The gay music playing... two men were on the dance floor dancing together'' ahahaha...

Holy shit

OoOoOooHhHhh

I love this story. Has an bittersweet end but I love it.
Although Remy and Alois are died, they met again in another reality (more or less)
I wanted to cry, Alois and Remy...
:(
Thanks to write this story

Well damn

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, you really did a good job in keeping everyone in character and created a wonderfully in-depth character... You have a beautiful gift for writing and I hope you continue!

This chapter made me cry!

...whenever I look at a spider now my first reaction us "CLAUDE"...

I personally love stories centered around Alois and well thought-out OCs. This story is impeccably crafted. Thank you for sharing it!

Did you mean "Claude and I will deal with Ciel"?