Sorry but thanks for the read

That was really good!

Epic! I love this! I've only seen some of Mentalist, but man do I love it! Awesome writing.

Woe

Oh god, the writing for this is so twisted and fucking beautiful.

I want to read Hollow Men so bad now.

Wow. That was really intense. It was amaxing!

Beautifully written, amazing work.

That was brilliant!

This was beautifully written! Great job pulling together all these elements and events that bring RJ and Jane to their final showdown. I loved the comparisons youvdrew between them and the vivid description in each part, especially how RJ first gets attached to Jane. It's all very gripping and original and you really pull the reader into RJ's mind, a creepy place as you mentioned lol but nonetheless pretty accurate I imagine. Lived the mention of Lisbon and her role in all of this, as well as the format of the story and the poem you used. Truly wonderful work!

Yana

Another incredible fic! Most authors can't pull of the second person narrative, but you do so wonderfully, with vivid detail and palpable emotion. Excellent work, WSS! :)

Wow! I cannot click 'Add Story to Favourites' quick enough! This was so amazing, just..ah...so...asdkfjaskfjsklf

The poem just fits perfectly and you have just the right amount of angst and creepiness without looking like a complete blood thirsty psychopath - not that there isnt anything wrong with bloody thirsty psychopaths (please dont hurt me!)

And how you described him killing Janes family? OMG OMG OMG! So heartbreakingly, tearjerkingly sad. And you used their actual real names *pat on back* which kind of makes it sadder in a weird way.

"Mister Jane, why so sad?" - wow, I just had an image of The Joker from Batman...creepy stuff

I could go on and on but to sum it all up: AMAZING! Well done!

it was so awesome. you should turn it into a story. it was really good.

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*dies*

Oh my gosh, this is so bizarre! It's creepy and elegant and all over the place. It's so Red John that I'm /dying/ here.

Wow.

Just... wow.

And I love the Hollow Men so much. TS Eliot is one of my favorite poets!

Ah the drama! The allusions! The angst! The creepyness!

*is dead*

Oooh. This is really kindo creepy... RJ is so... vivid and scary.

All the little details about people he's known and the bird are horibly scary... it's like a real serial killer...

This is way dark and bizarre, and stirring. You write it so well though. Can't say it is my favorite kind of read, but anything you write is immensely entertaining.

XD