Such a sad story.

I applaud the quality of it, it was really well written.

Of course there were a whole lot 'buts' that entered my thoughts when reading it but I won't bother you with them.

No critics on a exceptionally well written story

Famous Fault

depressing. dark. mortifying

and the only thing we can feel for him is pity

sometimes you lose when you win, but most times we learn that too late. "Loss of the winners"

This is a really good one-shot...if slightly depressing. I look forward to reading more from you.

This would make a brilliant start to a stroy. But it's great as a stand alone as well.