you didn't do best to keep updating

This is a really great story! I'm so glad you wrote this, most stories always feature people joining Luffy's Straw Hat crew but i have really come to start liking the Red Haired Pirates after reading this. So good job for thinking of this amazingly unique story!

So he ate Hito Hito no Mi, Model: Ghost, A Mythical Zoan type

That was hilarious.

If she has to die, have her make a choice that will make a choice that she knows well lead to her death

Holy crap spaz is naruto! Doesnt think, excited about anything shouts all the time and doesnt shut up.

I knew that this was not finished but I still started reading because I loved your other fic so much! Hope you will come back to this!

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

lol. nice backstory, and timing

liking it

This story had potential but you try to hard to add unnecessary plot imo spaz is meh imo and I feel like him traveling the world getting stronger by himself would of been way better meets Robin for a bit he helps her then leaves and then joins maybe Luffy at water 7 by chance and that sets up the romance in a way also but meh I feel like story was too boring it's way too slice of life for me

Loved the story and thought I would like to read more of it I also like that you stopped at this point. The beginning of a new adventure. Hope you will write a sequel either of the next two years or after a time skip like they did in one piece.

I wish this story would continue~

omg, spaz, that ghost story, Harry.
ow, I laughed so hard my abs hurt, then I couldn't stop coughing.
thank you, that brightened up a sucky day.

BOrding

I dont read a Read all a bout COOKING