that was such a interesting read
in a short time you showed a new famiglia in the making, with their new duties and all. loved that chrome know how to evade the obstacles at tsuna's house, it shows that she was there a lot and that the house is still well lived, even in these new circunstances.
you wrote the tension well, and kept wonderfully in character. loved it!
hope chrome comes back alive but it the fic is better with an open ending.
faved it.

Why? ;_; Why Chrome?!

This is of course an unneeded story now with canon, but I definitely feel like it's something that would happen. I can't see Ken, Chikusa, and Chrome NOT planning how to break out Mukuro everyday alone at Kokuyo Land.

I think that the worst part of Chrome's "betrayal" is that it's really all in her head because Tsuna would forgive her for it anyway. Nice job.

hmm interesting very intersing but there are lot of empty space! it should have a sequel!

nice story

poor tsuna not knowing chrome is betraying him (in a way)

Definitely good. You keep both of them in character, and this is a very good scenario for why Chrome, Ken, and Chikusa would all attack the vindice on their own.