This is one of the most canon-accurate protrayals of Dimentio in love i've ever seen. Dimentio is SELFISH, he is incredibly selfish. He doesnt know (or care!) to consider anyone else's feelings but his own. Oh, your already married and DONT love him back? Well, sorry, Timpani, you have no say in the matter.

You have thoroughly convinced me that Dimentio, does indeed, love Timpani, but he's still a massive asshole. Sure, you can argue that he had her best interests at heart, seeing as that without his help she fucking DIES (that ending tho) But he also was litterally trying to seduce her and bend her mind to his will the entire time he was confessing. Yep, thats a very Dimentio thing to do. What a dick, I love him.

Also: thank god for Mimi, though. I honestly love how she's portrayed here. Even before any of this shit goes down she knows Dimentio well enough and knows whats up. If she hadnt walked in and saved the day, Dimentio would've have fucking TOOK Timpani. Just, took her. Bye. Mimi is protrayed as being childish, but also an adult. And thats honestly my favorite interpretation of her. Sorry that this was more of a gush than a review, but I just really like this fic.

(A thought just occured to me: Where the hell is Nastasia? She's the only one not present.)

To highlight Dimentio's evil and insanity, I would have had him laugh mirthlessly at Timpani's capture.
Otherwise good fic.

WOAH That was not AT ALL what I expected.

You just HAD to add on that depressing ending, didn't you?! YOU JUST HAD TO DO IT, DIDN'T YOU?! I'm sorry, but I was just hoping that this event between Dimentio and Timpani would be simply left in the dust, a loose incident that had nothing severe other than Dimentio's heart breaking...but NOOOOOO!

And even though she got spared from being killed by being sent to a new world, all that tells me is that she is permanently cursed... to wander around dimensions FOREVER! BOOOO! DIMENTIO! Son of a *****! Timpani ended up hating you because you thought you could get away with convincing her to abandon her boyfriend for you...and then you send her to the fucking dogs of death?! Is that really supposed to help your damn ego?! You know what?! PREPARE TO DIE, *****!

I can only think of one particular quote right now within my angry response to this: "The things I do for love..." ~Courage The Cowardly Dog

Ok. With salt out of the way, I enjoyed reading this very much, and desperately hoping Timpani would not fall for Dimentio's spell. Writing (quality) was good and kept me interested. However, Dimentio was manipulative. Very manipulative. And I think I like that. (O_O)

Oh you poor dumb
You poor pitiful dumb

Rare to find a genuine Dimpani fic (and an awesomely savage one at that).

Gah... That was so... SICK... But so well-written...

Whoa... So intense... I love it!

I loved i even though it was so dark but thats what made it so unique :)

O_O. By God, this is awesome. I could TOTALLY see this happening! Awesomeness, that is all I can say.

*eye-twitch*

My hatred...

for Dimentio...

just got...

20% more intense...

This was awesome.

this is going to give me nightmares. not because the story was bad, but because it was, soooo... SICK! I am not TRYING to be mean, but it... its just the most wretched ting i have ever read!

Thats just what i like... A ha ha ha ha TEE HEE! (Sorry, im dimentia, so, im a little mad myselffff...feeeeeeeeqefgerereeeee

YAY FOR DARK AND SICKENING STORIES :D well done good friend :)

Now that I have seriously sat down and read this through, I realize something very disturbing. I enjoy this...I find the harsh love and anger...delicious... Blumiere is just so...and Timpani and Dimentio...UGGHHHHHH... I really liked the Dimentio/Timpani/Rape part...

I need therapy.

Yeah, I noticed you didn't proofread, as Timpani was spelled as Timpany once. But, since you are aware of that, and most likely any errors that came from that, I won't judge your story on that.

Now, I thought this story was interesting. I never considered where Bluimere had hidden with Timpani, or the fact that O'Chunks, Mimi and Dimentio were there too. I was almost expecting Nastasia to show up, but oh well.

The thought of Dimentio loving Timpani was also an interesting take. To me, he never seemed the type to love someone like that, and more than not would end up using them. Even in love, he tried to use Timpani.

Everyone was also in character as I could see, which is a plus.

I do have a couple concerns though.

The first has to do with the fact that when two people, you only describe actions when need be, and stick to quotes until the action came up. This can get confusing sometimes, since you can lose track of who is speaking and when. I did get confused a couple times, and had to think a little bit.

As for Dimentio being able to hypnotize Timpani, that didn't seem right to me. If he could have done that, I'm sure he would have done that instead of that sprout on both O'Chunks or Luigi's heads. Nastasia, as well, is the one who hypnotizes people, and I'm pretty sure powers are not shared.

My final concern is about Dimentio giving away their hiding place. It does seem like his style, and maybe he did do that. However, it seemed to be known by both Blumiere and Timpani, so I don't know if Bluimere would be willing to let Dimentio be part of his group, knowing that he could betray them again.

No aside from that, this was a good story!