What a whirlwind! It was easy to follow. There is so much great content packed in 2 chapters! It would make a great multi-chapter AU story since we know what happened, or a flash-the other know about Widmore now from Lost canon, but I haven't found a good fan fiction exploring the Alvar Hanso vs. Oceanic 6 turning up. You have so many great stories, ideas, storylines. Not sure if you are professional writer now but I could see you doing that for television series, something dramatic, adventure, romantic, epic ... You have a great gift!

Loved it!

Very very nice...great ending :)
Your style was ever so good!
Thank you for writing!

Very intriguing and beautifully written...

Ugh. So sweet. So adorable. I like how you added some cusses and sex, it makes it actually better.
You have just written a better ending to Lost than the writers, fuck them. What kind of shit was that? Oh, hey, nobody got together, but we've always got heaven, right? Total fucking shit.

Dark and light - nice lost-esque contrast and great jate. I miss them.

Awww - yay for a happy ending with a Jaby 3 Great work Yas!

Wow, this last part is fantastic. I really liked the way you ended it (Jaby!) and how Sayid managed to bring the corporations down. It's nice that Jack and Kate will be able to raise their child in a world where they don't have to be hiding all the time. You did such a great job with this and I hope you have ideas for another one or two-shot soon. :)

Interesting take on the O6 story. I could have seen that happening and its still in character for both J/K but esp for Kate. And a happy end, who knew? lol. Love your style.

It was a bit confusing, but at the end it cleared out. And it was soo cute, aww. A Jaby! And happy Jate, yay!

this was grat yasy,angst...a bit of fluff... 3

loved it babe!

And to think that you didn't even want to write the 2nd chapter. I loved it. I'm addicted to your fics LOL

Oooh, this looks very promising. I'm glad you included the background story, it will definitely make the next part easier to understand. It's so sad what has happened to the Oceanic Six, and I hope that Jack and Kate are somehow able to set things right (though I have to admit, life on the run is kind of exciting too and I am looking forward to seeing more Jate!) :D :D :D

gimme more jate. NAO!

As always, I loved the fic. Can't wait for the jate heavy part.

See? I didn't cry this time LOL