Wow, this was a fantastic look in Holden arriving at the Utonium's household! Absolutely stellar. You got the personalities of the girls down perfectly, and it really seemed to be like it was from the show itself. It's a shame it wasn't. Keep up awesome work like this!

Sweet story. Your OC rocks!

maybe you should make one about holden's parents point of view. Just saying!

LOL!

The project's with Blossom!

So that's how peaceful Earth is before that damnit Planet Fusion targeted it.

Love how you added Numbuh Five in it.

HOLY CRAP! THIS IS A GOOD STORY, BUT OVER FIVE THOUSAND WORDS IN ONE CHAPTER!