I didn't read this chapter. Yet.
Truth is I fear to start reading something that would never be completed.
So. I'll put it in my "Follow", and if you start posting once again, then I'll read it.
Deal ?
;D

***Pyrane***

another abandoned story

Great story! Please write more! :)

sweeeeeeeeeeeetness! i'm so glad it's updated. been waiting for this for a long time. short but oh well haha. i like how she didn't say it directly at first and it's just so awesome seeing him so happy! i also do wonder about the girl faramir saw... like what's going to happen between her and boromir...

I am glad you wrote are writing a sequel. Yay. One suggestion. Watch your tenses as you have altered them a couple of times. Other than that good work

Hi, it's pandagirl again!

I just finished the prequel to this story a couple minutes ago. THen I started to read this, and it's really good. I love the wedding scene, I wouldn't have done it any other way. And the characters haven't changed, which is great. Well, good luck and I hope you have fun writing this! I know you will do a great job!

Thanks again (for the stories and for reading this)!

From,

pandagirl

Hi there! I am really enjoying this story, Just a few things I'd like to mention:

1. Feminism wasn't really evident in medieval societies (e.g. Éowyn altering the marriage vows is somewhat anachronistic).

2. Remember that the Prince and Princess of Ithilien would have servants to prepare their meals and serve their food. Éowyn would only be cooking if she fancied doing it.

3. Similarly, Éowyn and Faramir would not be packing their own belongings!

4. "We are receiving an Embassy from the Haradrim and Aragorn needs my help". I would change this to "We are receiving an Embassy from the Haradrim and the King has requested my attendance". Aragorn would not NEED help for such an occasion, but he might request it. In any case, as Steward of Gondor and Prince of Ithilien, Faramir would be required to attend most court functions anyway.

5. Watch your grammar! (e.g. "Me and Éowyn" is bad grammar - it should be "Éowyn and I". Similarly ""Go set this on the table." is an American form of grammar that is actually not good grammar. It should be ""Go and set this on the table.")

Happy writing! May the spirit of TOlkien inspire you!

Hugs,

Sarah x

Hi! I've read ANFOTR for many months now, I was a little sad you put an end to it but I'm so thrilled you wrote a sequel! I absolutely love it and I think it is the best LOTR fanfic I've read so far. The friendship between Aragorn and Faramir is simply perfect, and I really like Boromir's presence in the story. I may not review a lot because I don't write fluently in English, but please, please, keep on updating. :)

A very promissing beginning... I love it! :)