Why stop there? End the story . !

i'm sad you haven't updated in some time and I really love this story so I hope you update soon

You might want to remove your relatives names and years of death. People can use that sort of info to find you in real life.

will there ever be an update?
Please! It's so well written! And such a beautiful and fairytellish concept. And i need to know how Harry will be saved. And i tottally need to see Frederick (no sir for you Asshole!) in hell!

Update asap I love this story

Wait- What?! No more?! Noooooooooo! Why!? What will happen to Harry? D-':

Ok.. So now when snape remembers the deaths return potion... That stupid idiot dumb old ass hat ghost man who led Harry into this mess in the first place ruins it again? Classic. Now there is a fucking cliff hanger to deal with...
GOD! I like fan fictions and at least this one doesn't use bad language unlike me cuz I'm mad
But that FUCKING STUPID GRAVE YARD FUCKING ASS HAT IDIOT HAD TO FUCK UP ANOTHER PERSONS LIFE: Neville's GAWD WHUT THE FUCK GHUSTS I THHOT YU GUYS WAS NICE WUZ I FUXINH WRON? FUX YEA!
And the cliff hanger... I just can't tell you how much I hate a fucking cliff hanger.

Anni Potter thinks that Sir Frederick is a big fat asshole and I highly suggest that he keep his abnormally large face out of other peoples business.
I also suggest that Professor snape works a bit harder on the potion that can arise people from the dead. If snape really loved Harry this much why did he not think of that earlier?
God Albus DumbleBORE you really don't care about Harry and your first thought after you found out that he died was: OH! Harry is dead. Mk fine by me not that I needed him anyway
And your second thought was: we need a new chosen one! Yah..
My first thought: DUMBLEDORE YOU BIG FAT FUCKING ASSHOLE! GET A FUCKING GRIP!
My second thought: OH MY GOD! IT COUKD TAKE CENTURIES FOR YOU TO GET ANOTHER CHOSEN ONE! ALSO IF HARRY IS "THE CHOSEN ONE" THEN THERE CANT BE ANOTHER ITS THE "Chosen OOOOONEEEEE" WHAT PART OF ONE DO YOU NOT GET HUHHHH!?
My last thought: GAWD AND WHUT ABOT THAT POTION? DUDE THE ANSWER IS UNDER YOUR LONG CROOKED BROKEN NOSE!

All of this was meant for the characters actions in the story I have nothing against the author except for the fact that the keep trying to stall.
Thank your for your time and effort in reading this,
Best wishes on your future fan fictions,

-Anni Potter

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUC
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
HARRY POTTER WILL NOT DIE
GAWD I HATE MY LIFE!
WHY

WHYYYYYYYYYYYY HARRY WHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
WHYYYYYYYYYYYY YOU HAVE TO DIEEEEEEEEEEEE
SNAPE WHAT UBOUT THt DEATH POTION THINK
USE TYE FWOLER AND REVIVE HARRY
IF YOU LOVE HIM DAT MUCCH Think

ABOT THESE THANGS!

HAAAAAARRRRRRRREEEEEE!

My god I really don't have a comment

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I am amazed this is a very cool story and I am very sorry that I have not started with this one
IT IS AMAZING SO AMAZING IM GONNA DIE!

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I love this one! It's so, well, it leaves you on a cliff hanger! I can't wait to read more!

Man..that's very sad. I just hope it doesn't get inappropriate like some other fan fictions that I've seen... Erg the last one was gross...

Oh my god! Continue this story